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julieputty's review
4.0
This book is over-written at times, feeling like the author was searching in her dictionary for big, elegant words. But the story is very sound and the main character sympathetic. I look forward eagerly to the next book in the series.
bethr's review
3.0
Imaginative world-building, but over-written. And believe me, I love an extensive vocabulary and poetic descriptions, but there are ways and ways. Nevertheless, once little mystery protagonist finally got out of the darkish tower, things got more interesting. I’ve got the entire trilogy, so although I don’t find it compelling reading, I expect to finish it...eventually.
eafiu's review
emotional
mysterious
slow-paced
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
para's review
3.0
The Ill-Made Mute is basically the fantasy equivalent of comfort food. It felt cozy and nostalgic, that sort of book you read curled up in a blanket with a cup of tea, and I'd say that despite its many flaws and the cliché/predictable nature of certain plot elements, it was still worth reading.
The plot is mostly about our protagonist's seach for memories, identity and a cure for poisoning which disfigured their face. After waking up in a tower and spending some time (well, the first 100 or so pages) as a servant, wandering around and being mistreated by everyone, they sneak on a windship and escape with the hope of finding a cure but stumble upon adventure instead. Regardless, despite the fact that nothing happens, I actually liked the early tower section the best and could read a whole book's worth of that.
Being without memories and completely unable to speak, the titular ill-made mute is mostly a blank slate in the beginning, and remains more of a passive observer than an actor even after learning sign language. Characterisation in general is fairly shallow, with the biggest offender being the love interest, who has no other personality aside from being perfect in every single way. I rolled my eyes. A lot. I'm not against romance in fantasy, but I prefer for both parties to have personalities and I don't know, chemistry. This didn't feel natural at all and is probably my least favourite aspect of the series.
However, where the book really shines is the worldbuilding and the atmosphere. It's mostly borrowing from Celtic folklore, and judging from the list of sources at the end, the author seems to have done her research. This is visible in the inclusion of various creatures, both seelie and unseelie, the myths told by various characters, as well as snippets of language used by the Ertish. I haven't read many Celtic-influenced books, so it felt fresh, too. And I'm generally a sucker for mythology regardless. Aside from that, there are also flying horses, windships, sky pirates, enchanted forests, caves full of treasure, cities, and much more. It really brings back the childlike sense of wonder.
The prose is rich and descriptive, leaning heavily towards purpleness and thesaurus abuse. Whether this is a good or a bad thing I leave for you to decide. I rather liked it and thought it fits the old-fashioned nature of the world and the story really well, but I can see where the bad reviews are coming from. There are many digressions that put the plot on pause, usually to tell a myth (or two...or three...) or to describe the surroundings. This slows the book down even more, although again, I didn't mind and found the mythology infodumps pretty interesting. Still, it requires some patience. And speaking of prose, the author is very fond of the word "eldritch".
As for the ending...I knew what was going to happen. I knew it was going to be an "ugly duckling" story, that she'd find a way to restore her face and voice, because there was no was the author would let the protagonist remain like that and I'm torn on it. In a way, it fits the folk-tale nature of it well enough because that's what happens in stories, but on the other hand, having a mute, unsightly protagonist was just so interesting and so much could have been done with the concept that it felt like a bit of a waste.
I have read the second book since. It starts slower and the love story gets a twist I saw coming from a mile off, but the second half is an improvement and the three-chapter reveal at the end genuinely interesting, if long-winded. It seems like our protagonist will take more of an active role in the third book and I want to see how it ends.
Enjoyment: 3.5/5
Execution: 2/5
Recommended for: fans of Patricia McKillip (sure it's not as good, but the feeling is similar), those looking for folk-tale inspired traditional fantasywith a female protagonist
Not Recommended for: those who like fast-paced books or can't stand purple prose
More reviews on my blog, To Other Worlds.
The plot is mostly about our protagonist's seach for memories, identity and a cure for poisoning which disfigured their face. After waking up in a tower and spending some time (well, the first 100 or so pages) as a servant, wandering around and being mistreated by everyone, they sneak on a windship and escape with the hope of finding a cure but stumble upon adventure instead. Regardless, despite the fact that nothing happens, I actually liked the early tower section the best and could read a whole book's worth of that.
Being without memories and completely unable to speak, the titular ill-made mute is mostly a blank slate in the beginning, and remains more of a passive observer than an actor even after learning sign language. Characterisation in general is fairly shallow, with the biggest offender being the love interest, who has no other personality aside from being perfect in every single way. I rolled my eyes. A lot. I'm not against romance in fantasy, but I prefer for both parties to have personalities and I don't know, chemistry. This didn't feel natural at all and is probably my least favourite aspect of the series.
However, where the book really shines is the worldbuilding and the atmosphere. It's mostly borrowing from Celtic folklore, and judging from the list of sources at the end, the author seems to have done her research. This is visible in the inclusion of various creatures, both seelie and unseelie, the myths told by various characters, as well as snippets of language used by the Ertish. I haven't read many Celtic-influenced books, so it felt fresh, too. And I'm generally a sucker for mythology regardless. Aside from that, there are also flying horses, windships, sky pirates, enchanted forests, caves full of treasure, cities, and much more. It really brings back the childlike sense of wonder.
The prose is rich and descriptive, leaning heavily towards purpleness and thesaurus abuse. Whether this is a good or a bad thing I leave for you to decide. I rather liked it and thought it fits the old-fashioned nature of the world and the story really well, but I can see where the bad reviews are coming from. There are many digressions that put the plot on pause, usually to tell a myth (or two...or three...) or to describe the surroundings. This slows the book down even more, although again, I didn't mind and found the mythology infodumps pretty interesting. Still, it requires some patience. And speaking of prose, the author is very fond of the word "eldritch".
As for the ending...
I have read the second book since. It starts slower and the love story gets a twist I saw coming from a mile off, but the second half is an improvement and the three-chapter reveal at the end genuinely interesting, if long-winded. It seems like our protagonist will take more of an active role in the third book and I want to see how it ends.
Enjoyment: 3.5/5
Execution: 2/5
Recommended for: fans of Patricia McKillip (sure it's not as good, but the feeling is similar), those looking for folk-tale inspired traditional fantasy
Not Recommended for: those who like fast-paced books or can't stand purple prose
More reviews on my blog, To Other Worlds.
solaris's review
Update: As of Feb. 20th, I gave up on page 59. It was 60 pages too many.
I'm on page 19 of this book, partway through chapter 2, and this might become my fastest DNF ever, ahead even of Twilight and Fifty Shades of Grey.
The book reads like the author was given unbridled access to a thesaurus and yet had no sense when not to use it. She will never use a plain word if she could instead use three obtuse multi-syllable words, and takes every opportunity to use odd or unusual sentence structure. This book reminds me of nothing more than a university essay by a student who knows their argument is weak, and who decides to bluff their way through with large and fancy words to hide its short-comings. Reading more than a couple pages at a time makes me cross-eyed. This book gives me headaches. So far I'm too stubborn to give it up, but considering I put it down twenty minutes ago and my eyes still hurt I don't think I'll have a choice.
I'm on page 19 of this book, partway through chapter 2, and this might become my fastest DNF ever, ahead even of Twilight and Fifty Shades of Grey.
The book reads like the author was given unbridled access to a thesaurus and yet had no sense when not to use it. She will never use a plain word if she could instead use three obtuse multi-syllable words, and takes every opportunity to use odd or unusual sentence structure. This book reminds me of nothing more than a university essay by a student who knows their argument is weak, and who decides to bluff their way through with large and fancy words to hide its short-comings. Reading more than a couple pages at a time makes me cross-eyed. This book gives me headaches. So far I'm too stubborn to give it up, but considering I put it down twenty minutes ago and my eyes still hurt I don't think I'll have a choice.
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