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3.51 AVERAGE
3.51 AVERAGE
I’m writing for this book then the series as a whole.
Spice:
Book 1: 1/5
Book 2: 3.5/5 lots of graphic scenes though.
Books 3: 3/5
Series as a whole:
To me it read like the novellas you use coins to unlock chapters. Those are my guilty pleasure. Really good stories that probably needs a fair amount of editing and perhaps some fleshing out. However, I really did enjoy this series.
Book 1: I kinda read this like the girl with the tragic backstory gains 8 wolf daddy doms while not all are that way. Some of the stuff Is juvenile but taking the street life into account and some unnamed things for later plot development and you get some really silly events. The cliffhanger at the end is heartbreaking.
Book 2: this is book is about recovery, mating development, and adjustment. Really not a whole lot of plot. We learn more about dad but mom is still a mystery. I enjoyed it for the relationship growth.
Book 3: is where all the plot happens. Relationship set backs from the withholding information in the name of protection trope but then we learn about mom and how it all went down.
The plot execution is clunky but still enjoyable. There were times I was confused until the characters “process” the information.
What I love about this series:
- Werewolves (alpha, luna, beta, pack house, warriors, novella style structure)
- low female population/ rare females
- h tragic past yet she is something special
- white wolf
- breeding
- pregnancy
- multiple babies
- making the RH work
Spice:
Book 1: 1/5
Book 2: 3.5/5 lots of graphic scenes though.
Books 3: 3/5
Series as a whole:
To me it read like the novellas you use coins to unlock chapters. Those are my guilty pleasure. Really good stories that probably needs a fair amount of editing and perhaps some fleshing out. However, I really did enjoy this series.
Book 1: I kinda read this like the girl with the tragic backstory gains 8 wolf daddy doms while not all are that way. Some of the stuff Is juvenile but taking the street life into account and some unnamed things for later plot development and you get some really silly events. The cliffhanger at the end is heartbreaking.
Book 2: this is book is about recovery, mating development, and adjustment. Really not a whole lot of plot. We learn more about dad but mom is still a mystery. I enjoyed it for the relationship growth.
Book 3: is where all the plot happens. Relationship set backs from the withholding information in the name of protection trope but then we learn about mom and how it all went down.
The plot execution is clunky but still enjoyable. There were times I was confused until the characters “process” the information.
What I love about this series:
- Werewolves (alpha, luna, beta, pack house, warriors, novella style structure)
- low female population/ rare females
- h tragic past yet she is something special
- white wolf
- breeding
- pregnancy
- multiple babies
- making the RH work
I'm going to be brutal here, if that will be upsetting for you then please stop here.
Jesus christ. I once told myself I'd only give a book a 1 star review if the mistakes were so bad it was unreadable and sadly I finally found a book that meets that criteria. I so wanted to give this book a shot because it had a rare trope I really wanted to read but holy shit I got 40% through and I just can't any more.
There are CONSTANT really obvious mistakes, the editing feels non-existent. The writing in general is awful. The dialogue is awkward as fuck, especially Remy's during family meetings. I could almost look past the weird narrator voice and put it down to the FMC's naivety given her upbringing, but then everyone sounds just as weird. Also, she'll go from not knowing what a ferris wheel is to then mentioning rivets, her knowledge of the world is wildly inconsistent. Can't even put that down to her upbringing because she apparently gave herself a high school graduate level of education by age 12 from the fucking library?? None of it makes sense. Not to mention that the writing tense constantly changes back and forth from past to present.
There's a bunch of slut shaming, weird and incorrect notions about drugs, and a fucking horrific understanding of virginity and rape in the "medical" scene towards the beginning.
There is just so much wrong with this book, I can't do it anymore.
Jesus christ. I once told myself I'd only give a book a 1 star review if the mistakes were so bad it was unreadable and sadly I finally found a book that meets that criteria. I so wanted to give this book a shot because it had a rare trope I really wanted to read but holy shit I got 40% through and I just can't any more.
There are CONSTANT really obvious mistakes, the editing feels non-existent. The writing in general is awful. The dialogue is awkward as fuck, especially Remy's during family meetings. I could almost look past the weird narrator voice and put it down to the FMC's naivety given her upbringing, but then everyone sounds just as weird. Also, she'll go from not knowing what a ferris wheel is to then mentioning rivets, her knowledge of the world is wildly inconsistent. Can't even put that down to her upbringing because she apparently gave herself a high school graduate level of education by age 12 from the fucking library?? None of it makes sense. Not to mention that the writing tense constantly changes back and forth from past to present.
There's a bunch of slut shaming, weird and incorrect notions about drugs, and a fucking horrific understanding of virginity and rape in the "medical" scene towards the beginning.
There is just so much wrong with this book, I can't do it anymore.
This is a nice book where you don't have to necessarily pay attention and can turn your brain off. It could've been way better had the narration been showing us instead of just telling what had happened.
I adore Kitten's naivety and innocence but sometimes it bothers on childlike. And don't get me wrong I love my dumb lovable FMCs as much as my badass FMCs maybe even more. Just the way the guys respond to her sometimes is a little ehhhhh.
I don't think its a fully formed story even if I enjoy it but if you're in the mood for not taking things too seriously this ones for you
Edit: The amount of times this author uses the term 'indian style' just to describe sitting whatever happened to cross legged????? You can't even reason it with being dated since it came out in 2016??
I adore Kitten's naivety and innocence but sometimes it bothers on childlike. And don't get me wrong I love my dumb lovable FMCs as much as my badass FMCs maybe even more. Just the way the guys respond to her sometimes is a little ehhhhh.
I don't think its a fully formed story even if I enjoy it but if you're in the mood for not taking things too seriously this ones for you
Edit: The amount of times this author uses the term 'indian style' just to describe sitting whatever happened to cross legged????? You can't even reason it with being dated since it came out in 2016??
medium-paced
SPOILERS THROUGHOUT
This first book was one of my favorite Reverse Harem (RH) books I've read thus far. The plot was slow, allowing "Kitten" to build the relationship with each of the men. This was so important in the series considering how many men. I was skeptical at first. Many of the RH books I've read had such crazy plots that the reader doesn't get to know each of the characters, which in turn, makes the characters forgettable. And those book never had more than 4 men. The author here did an exceptional job showing individual personalities and relationships.
That said, book two was a disappointment. I felt like it was the exact opposite of the first book, i.e. fast plot, repetitive-feeling scenes with the men. I didn't end up finishing it.
This first book was one of my favorite Reverse Harem (RH) books I've read thus far. The plot was slow, allowing "Kitten" to build the relationship with each of the men. This was so important in the series considering how many men. I was skeptical at first. Many of the RH books I've read had such crazy plots that the reader doesn't get to know each of the characters, which in turn, makes the characters forgettable. And those book never had more than 4 men. The author here did an exceptional job showing individual personalities and relationships.
That said, book two was a disappointment. I felt like it was the exact opposite of the first book, i.e. fast plot, repetitive-feeling scenes with the men. I didn't end up finishing it.
DNF at 25%. I've read this before, but it doesn't seem as good as I remember it being. I'm not going to force myself to read an old favorite.
adventurous
dark
emotional
lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Complicated
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
The main character gets too annoying to handle for me to enjoy this one. At first she's fine but she slowly turns into this irritating, ignorant, too-good-to-be-true, slightly manipulative thing. She even keeps mispronouncing Yoga and "Yoba" which is supposed to be endearing. It's hard to cheer for romantic relationships when the woman is obsessed with stuffed animals, piggyback rides and acting like a child around eight men. Also, her name is actually Kitten....which gets annoying since they keep saying, even saying "Miss Kitten." Sigh. On the other hand the guys actually aren't bad, but there's a lot of past history that makes them feel all bad for her and protective. There is very little story after awhile - it's mainly conversations about playing about the most random things. Also, eight is just too much so I start getting them confused or forgetting about some of them.
The story is too long considering the development doesn't offer enough changes, and the longer the story goes the more clear it is that "Kitten" has the IQ of a steak.
AND her age makes no sense. Half the time it reads as a YA novel since she starts as 16 but then apparently is an adult later because she "counted" summers starting at 4-6 yrs old, so add 16 to that or whatever. She acts so childish though --- the doctor in the pack, she takes her teddy bear to him for "surgery" sewing and runs around with candy baskets - so I hardly care about her erotic explorations with the guys. It's weird.
The story is too long considering the development doesn't offer enough changes, and the longer the story goes the more clear it is that "Kitten" has the IQ of a steak.
AND her age makes no sense. Half the time it reads as a YA novel since she starts as 16 but then apparently is an adult later because she "counted" summers starting at 4-6 yrs old, so add 16 to that or whatever. She acts so childish though --- the doctor in the pack, she takes her teddy bear to him for "surgery" sewing and runs around with candy baskets - so I hardly care about her erotic explorations with the guys. It's weird.