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crybabybea's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
This leans more toward the younger side of YA, which isn't bad but means the world and writing is quite simple, and the stakes don't feel as high as they could. The premise of the book is so interesting and unique - a main character who can't speak and uncovers a plot to take the throne. But, her not being able to speak doesn't actually matter at all, except that she can't tell anyone her true identity. People understand her perfectly, and the consequences for her being mute and cursed with an unremovable bowl on her head are nearly irrelevant.
I felt like this book tried to do too much at once. I found the weaving together of fairy tales (the main two being Hachikazuki and The Wild Swans) interesting and a unique take on a retelling. However, being YA, a lot of time was spent on the love story aspect which felt lackluster and caused the pacing to drag horribly in the middle of the book. The story was all over the place with fairytales, magic, love, battles, multiple antagonists, changing settings... it was just a lot and it caused the quality of the main plot to suffer.
The world didn't feel very clear to me, it was a pan-Asian fantasy setting that pulled from Chinese, Japanese, and Korean culture and didn't really have an identity of its own. The magic system still doesn't make all that much sense to me which really makes the last twist for our main character fall flat. It felt like the magic only existed as a plot device to invent either conflict or resolutions for Shiori. Her paper crane familiar, Kiki, is cute but was used to unnaturally move the plot forward. Same for Seryu, the dragon.
The characters were also quite flat and uninteresting. The whole emotional investment of the story comes from Shiori's desire to save her brothers, but we are never introduced to their personalities enough to care, the narrative just tells us who they are and how they act but they spend the entire story as cranes and we rarely interact with them. The main love interest is sweet but he very much falls into the Prince Charming role and doesn't have much complexity. The coolest character is a shapeshifting dragon but he disappears after we meet him and only shows up as a plot device once or twice in the story. I will say I did like our main character, Shiori, and her growth as a character felt satisfying and realistic.
As a fairytale retelling, this is fun and wholesome, and I especially enjoyed the weaving in of East Asian mythology/fairy tales as well as the way the author turned some of the tropes of the genre on its head. I did like the writing and the ideas of the author so I'm not completely turned off from trying something by Elizabeth Lim again though!
Graphic: Animal death, Body horror, Injury/Injury detail, and Fire/Fire injury
oakairi's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Death of parent, Death, and Blood
Moderate: Grief, Animal death, and Violence
Minor: Murder and War
dollwon's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Violence
Moderate: Grief, Gaslighting, Fire/Fire injury, Death, Car accident, Murder, and Death of parent
Minor: Animal death
necroplasm's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Graphic: Death of parent
Moderate: Kidnapping, Animal death, and Confinement
Minor: Violence and War
blackferrum's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Waktu pertama rilis, di bagian blub buku ditulis kalau Shiori dan keenam kakaknya kena kutukan. Dia nggak bisa ngomong, tepatnya nggak boleh karena kalau ada suara yang keluar, kakak-kakaknya bisa mati. Long story short, habis dikutuk, Shiori kepisah dari keenam kakaknya. Dia nggak tahu harus cari kakaknya mulai dari mana dan harus gimana. Yah, dia selama ini hidup di istana, apa-apa sudah tersedia, tapi begitu ada di dunia luar, dia bingung harus bersikap seperti apa dan harus ngapain agar dapat uang biar bisa makan. Akhirnya, dia nyolong dan berakhir jadi budak pemilik penginapan. Dari situ kehidupan Shiori jadi berbeda, dia berusaha keluar dari penginapan dan mencari kakak-kakaknya. Oh, iya, kakak-kakaknya ini dikutuk jadi bangau.
Aku suka dengan cara penulis masukin deskripsi tempat atau world building-nya tanpa bikin pembaca kebosanan. Malah nggak dijelasin menurutku. Gatal kepengin bolak-balik cek peta yang ada di awal buku, tapi nggak bisa (aplikasinya kurang gercep buat ini hehe). Dianggapnya kayak pembaca udah pasti hafal lah sama latar tempatnya. Nama-nama tempatnya juga nggak familiar (ya iyalah, kan fiksi, May -_-), mungkin pakai bahasa Cina (?) idk, karena begitu baca ini rasanya kayak lagi nonton drama Korea yang Joseon era gitu, ada beberapa yang hampir sama; kebiasaan, makanan, dll.
Karakterisasi Shiori konsisten sampai akhir. Dia keras kepala banget, tapi dalam artian baik dan itu yang bikin dia nggak takut buat menantang bahaya. Yah, beberapa bagian kupikir agak nekat sih, dia, tapi seandainya dia langsung menyerah atau takut lah minimal, kayaknya alurnya nggak akan jalan wkwkwk.
Nggak banyak tahu soal elemen fantasi, sih, tapi buku ini cukup menyenangkan. Setidaknya nggak bikin senewen karena kebanyakan deskripsi nggak perlu, alih-alih cukup ditunjukkan dengan dialog antarkarakter atau pakai cara lain yang nggak bikin pembaca bosan. Oh ya, terjemahannya luwes, cuma memang beberapa kata ada yang jarang digunakan (bukannya nggak pernah, ya), jadi terkesan masih asing dan baru.
Nggak sabar baca buku keduanya!!!
Graphic: Death, Slavery, Animal death, and Animal cruelty
Moderate: Death of parent, War, and Blood
dannilmp's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
This is a feel good story and comes to a satisfying conclusion following a whole colourful cast of magical individuals with different abilities, strenghts and weaknesses. If I had to fault anything, it would be that Shiori's behaviour did occasionally get on my nerves but then again she is a young adult and is going to have those personality traits that aren't so glamorous.
Graphic: Death of parent, Grief, and Death
Moderate: Violence and Animal death
Minor: War
fragrant_stars's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
One of the things I loved best was how much agency was given to Shiori as a character. The blurb on the back of the book suggested to me that she would be getting a lot more help from Seryu, but as I read the book
Graphic: Blood, Death of parent, Injury/Injury detail, Fire/Fire injury, and Grief
Moderate: Death, Physical abuse, Bullying, Animal death, and Emotional abuse
Minor: Murder, War, Misogyny, Violence, Classism, Sexual harassment, Sexism, Xenophobia, and Alcohol
wpapnik's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
The only reason I deducted 0.25 stars is because there were points where I felt the writing was rushed and I had wished Lim would have added an additional line or two to help better build the scene.
This book was a total page-turner for me, and if you have ever considered dipping your toe into the High Fantasy genre, this duology would be an excellent start!
Graphic: Death of parent, Blood, and Violence
Moderate: Animal death
Minor: War and Murder
neko_reads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.75
DAMN this book surprised me. i am taken aback by how much I loved this book and everything from the characters to the plot to the world building to the magic system.
did I mention I love the magic system? it has DRAGONS in it, how could it not be amazing?
also takkan. fbshkakfha we got so much takkan being the kindest person on the planet and yet I NEED SO MUCH MORE
yeah so this was amazing. and I need the next book.
Graphic: Death, Blood, and Death of parent
Moderate: Violence, Grief, and Animal death
Minor: War and Murder
calicat42's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Violence, Grief, Physical abuse, Torture, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, Abandonment, Animal death, Blood, Death, and Death of parent