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3.69 AVERAGE

funny sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
dark lighthearted fast-paced
challenging dark emotional hopeful sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Cute book I loved the fact that they had two kids and I honestly thought it was a fun read aside from their petty little fight everything else was cute would recommend it's also super lighthearted 
emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark emotional sad tense fast-paced
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I don't think it's ever been as obvious as in this book that Cora Reilly is not writing in English/her books are not originally written in English. Not to say that there is anything wrong with reading a translated and/or english-as-a-second-language book but GIRL GET AN EDITOR OR A RESEARCHER OR SOMETHING. It is needed for everything. For the grammar, the sentence structure, the facts, and the context. You've written about an entire universe set in the States but you haven't done even the simplest of Google search to figure out that "Sylvester day" isn't a thing here. Or that birth control isn't called an anti-baby pill (lol) in english. Or that you can't finish an accounting degree in 2 years at NYU (ok maybe you can if your husband is a capo...). Or that you don't take the cap off a pregnancy test to see if it's positive... Because that's where you just peed. All of these mistakes/errors really took me out of the story, and that's not even mentioning all the grammar and spelling mistakes, and the flowery, over dramatized languaged. 

The only thing that kept me going in this book was that I like the characters, and I wanted to see what Luca would do in the end, but otherwise this was so mediocre. 
challenging dark emotional sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
dark sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

Fierce love

The love story continues. This couple always keeps me interested. I am curious to see what becomes of Fabi. I feel bad for him. I rate this book a 3.5/5