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onvacay's review against another edition
4.0
Great effort for a debut novel! Good story. With a little polishing, this author has a bright career ahead.
• The story jumped from one scene to another without fully closing out the scene. The characters would be in the bathroom doing whatever they were doing at the time, but before wrapping up that scene all of a sudden they were in a bakery. I had to reread multiple places in the book to ensure I didn't miss anything.
• Using "Goddess" instead of "God" was annoying. The most feminine man I know would not use Goddess in place of God, so why would the hunky main characters use it?
• The relationship between the three principal characters is complete fantasy. I kept thinking, "Yeah, right." A girl can dream, I guess.
• Not the author's fault, several three-letter words were not correctly printed. was=as, the=he, she=he, etc.
• The story jumped from one scene to another without fully closing out the scene. The characters would be in the bathroom doing whatever they were doing at the time, but before wrapping up that scene all of a sudden they were in a bakery. I had to reread multiple places in the book to ensure I didn't miss anything.
• Using "Goddess" instead of "God" was annoying. The most feminine man I know would not use Goddess in place of God, so why would the hunky main characters use it?
• The relationship between the three principal characters is complete fantasy. I kept thinking, "Yeah, right." A girl can dream, I guess.
• Not the author's fault, several three-letter words were not correctly printed. was=as, the=he, she=he, etc.
scottyreadsstuff's review
Thank you to The StoryGraph and Julie Zantopoulos for hosting this giveaway and providing the opportunity to enter it!
I have nothing against this book, what I read so far was wonderful! I just need to pay better attention to trigger/content warnings. :)
I have nothing against this book, what I read so far was wonderful! I just need to pay better attention to trigger/content warnings. :)
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death of parent and Cursing
Moderate: Sexual content
saltt's review
adventurous
dark
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
amy_wolfe's review
adventurous
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Loveable characters? Yes
4.5
vivian021's review
adventurous
emotional
funny
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
I LOVED this book! The story was so captivating I was hooked right away. I loved the characters, the mystery, the plot and just everything about it. BRY, ASH and RIORDAN! All I want right now is book 2 *insert puppy dog eyes here* (lol). The writing was beautiful and I’m so glad I picked this book up. This book deserves more recognition.
quiet_reading_time's review against another edition
emotional
lighthearted
medium-paced