3.71 AVERAGE

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mrjln's review

3.5
lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Really charming romance, but all the fights or problems they need to solve sometimes didn't make sense or for me Marcellas insecurities got too much in the way and it was too frustrating to me. The fights also felt very forced at times.

The spice was okay. When they kiss it's super steamy but once it gets past that point it fell flat for me.

Love the representation and how much the latinx culture is part of her identity.

These is a lot I really like about this book.

First, you could tell the author is from the place she writing about. 

While it doesn't focus on it much, I like the discussion it has on the importance on having diverse books in the library.

Then there is the relationship. It was great. I understand the hesitation, because both characters have harbored feelings for someone else for a long time.

oooooo girl this HURT
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r_reynolds's review

3.0
emotional fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
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seareader425's review

3.0
emotional lighthearted reflective fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
lighthearted

I enjoyed this book to begin with but the last third was a but of a mess and I found myself skimming more and more. Time started moving at a weird pace and the main character spent too much time in her head. I also found Alice’s resolution to be too quick and easy, and it and Ben somewhat underdeveloped.
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grace_b_3's review

2.0
emotional lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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I really liked this story. It was fun, I was rooting for Marcela and Theo the whole story and was so mad at how Marcela kept self sabotaging throughout the book. But, the book felt like it needed a second or third round of checks and edits. I found myself having to re-read sentences and paragraphs because I constantly felt like I was missing something. At one critical “a-ha” moment Marcela says “I have to go” to end a conversation, and then the next chapter just picks up later in the week with no context of why she would have said that. The spicy scenes also felt forgotten about, there was lots of good tension and then it felt like you were questioning if they actually finished. I’m glad I read it and I will be checking out the authors next release this summer in hopes that she found a better editor.
lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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novelsandnotebooks's review

4.0

I loved this one so much. Actual rating: 4.5