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The Right Move by Liz Tomforde

chloejen's review against another edition

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4.0

it should be a punishable offense to name your children iverson and navy

isa_araujo's review against another edition

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funny medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes

3.75

junemoonbaby's review against another edition

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5.0

RYAN SHAY. THAT'S IT, THAT'S ALL ANYONE NEEDS TO KNOW.

on another note, i am willing to read Liz Tomforde's grocery list at this point

harley222's review against another edition

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emotional lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.75

sunbathedbookshelves's review against another edition

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5.0

"His quiet love."

no words. ryan shay, THE MAN THAT YOU ARE. if you want a fictional man who's being taught to be a book boyfriend, you should read this. if you want forced proximity, roommates, grumpy boy and sunshine girl, fake dating, sports romance, he spoils her, YOU HAVE TO READ THIS. also, did i mention that indigo's ex boyfriend is a huge fan of Chicago devils, ryan shay is the captain of Chicago devils. and guess who is dating the captain of Chicago devils when she runs into her ex? THAT'S RIGHT. IT'S MY WINNER, INDIGO IVERS. the way this man ryan shay cherishes her, provides for her? sobbing crying shaking. i teared up so many times when he did little things for her, like when he bought her a bed and the sheets were in her favorite color although he met her 24hrs ago. the way he tries to take care of her plants. he is so adorable. and my little indy-pendent woman was so lovely and i loved that ryan was trying to help her become independent. i loved her character development. there was also some miscommunication/misunderstandings but they sorted it out. and god, the tension was delicious. i ate this shit up. so good. i told my friend to read it 2 days ago, and she finished it before me, that's how addicting this book is.

niemoralnaa's review against another edition

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funny lighthearted relaxing medium-paced

3.5

redkvica's review against another edition

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hopeful lighthearted relaxing medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

tavii_'s review against another edition

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medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

haelynnestudio's review against another edition

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lighthearted medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

susuuuu's review against another edition

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2.0

"All I see is Blue."
'Translation: All I see is you.'


the 2 stars are a stretch. 1 star for the crumbs i got of zee & vee, and the other star for ryan.

ryan shay held this book together with his TEETH. he was good enough for me to continue reading but not good enough for me to give it more than 2 stars. he was amazing tho, the fact he learned sign language as soon as he found out her dad was deaf anddd he paid for her infertility treatment.

indy was so annoying. she was basically holding a gun to our heads to make us feel sorry for her. are u joking?? who the hell cares that ur childhood friend of 22 years turned boyfriend for 6 years, cheated on u? like ok i felt bad but then she dragged it through the MUD and back 90 times. i mean the man didn't even bother to learn sign language for ur father and u stayed with him, what did u expect?

don't get me started with her being dramatic with not being able to orgasm. are u fkn serious? there's people DYING KIM NO ONE CARES IF U CAN ORGASM OR NOT. & i can't begin to understand ryan for being attracted to her. she was absolutely too much

i'm gonna paste a scene that happened because i just cannot move past it, it's really itching me to rate this -10 stars. so, context is he stays up worried about her bc she was doing rideshare past midnight. she comes home & he's mad at her for doing it and this is what happens;
"Ryan Shay, do you care about me?"
"No."
She moves her shoulders, dancing around the island. "Ryan Shay cares about me!" He hands go to her knees, and she sticks her ass out, twerking in my kitchen.


i was mortified.

"Trust me. If we were fucking, they'd know. I'm not very quiet." i mean, who says that????

all in all, i did not enjoy this. i would have rather read a book with rosie, the dog. i hated indy. i did not love ryan per se, but i liked him.