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laura_devouring_books_crumpets's review against another edition
4.0
3.5
A good premise I wished it was a little longer as not really seeing much of the charaxters so far, but for such a short read very good!
A good premise I wished it was a little longer as not really seeing much of the charaxters so far, but for such a short read very good!
amyreadsandsails's review against another edition
3.0
I've read books 1-8 now. All the books are fairly short, but I enjoyed the world Annie Bellet has created. I was disappointed with how superficial Jade's relationship is with the Justice. I would have liked to see that build more and have some tension.
sjeckert's review against another edition
4.0
I have mixed feelings about this one. I liked the premise, I liked the world, I just didn't like the length (this is not a novel. this reads like a short story, no matter what the author says.) or some aspects of the writing. Additionally, a lot of the nerd references feel really forced (and I'm a self-proclaimed nerd), and I don't understand some of the character choices. I'm not sure if I will continue this series, as this first book feels too short and superficial to really be immersive, but it's decent.
jenlouisegallant's review against another edition
2.0
Even though I understand that this is the set up for the series, there wasn't enough romance in this. The storyline was kind of interesting though.
vikingwolf's review against another edition
3.0
Jade has kept the full details of her magical ability secret from even her closest friends as she makes a new life for herself. Using her magic will alert her psycho, heart eating ex to her location and endanger everyone she loves. But shifters are vanishing in town and Jade might have to risk her safety to save lives.
I enjoyed this urban fantasy novella a lot. Firstly it has a beautiful cover, which I like to see in my books. As it is under 100 pages, the author is not wasting much time on description. We get the basic descriptions that we need to set the scene and describe the characters appearances and that is all. That actually suits me as I don't like pages of descriptions about every room the person goes into and every piece of clothing worn by everyone etc. I like to get straight to the point of the story and this book certainly does that.
Jade is a good character. She is feisty and loyal but lives in constant fear of her evil ex Samir. By not using her magic for fear of alerting him to her location, Jade finds that she gets tired and out of shape each time she needs to use magic, which is something that I liked. The author indicates that to keep magic strong and powerful, you need to practice with it and Jade is making it harder to defend herself by not doing this. It is a nice plot twist. When she is called on to use the magic, it takes a lot of effort out of her meaning we are not just seeing an invincible witch. She is vulnerable and scared which means I could relate more to her and her situation. Alek is an interesting character. When his piercing blue eyes were mentioned I got an image in my head of Viggo Mortensen which is not a bad thing to be thinking of as you read! I liked her friends and the fact that they are gaming geeks, which was fun. I also liked that the shifters in the group were all different from each other.
The plot itself was interesting. A bad guy is draining power from shifters and planning an evil ritual that Jade and her friends have to stop. OK so there might not be anything new in that but when a story is well written you don't mind it not being original. And I thought it did deliver on plot. Jade makes an almost fatal mistake near the end which again, I liked because it is something that most people would have got wrong. I liked that she had that cowardly streak that had her thinking about running away, I liked that she was scared and did stupid things.
So what were the negatives about the book? Basically the length of it. While I was ok with the reduced description, the short book meant that the whole climax of the book was a bit rushed. I'd have liked to have seen a bit more of a tension filled ending where things are ramped up, followed by a huge magical battle. This is not what we got. It was a short rescue/fight scene which was over before it really got started which was a shame. Still, it didn't spoil my enjoyment of the story. There are also a few errors in it that a bit of proof reading would sort out ie spelling and words missing from sentences. Nothing too annoying though.
I would like to continue with the series but I refuse to pay full price for the remaining paperbacks if they are short novellas. Too many authors are doing this now, splitting a normal sized novel into three parts to get three times the amount of money from the reader. As a reader on a book budget, I won't be buying them unless they become discounted or greatly increase in size.
I enjoyed this urban fantasy novella a lot. Firstly it has a beautiful cover, which I like to see in my books. As it is under 100 pages, the author is not wasting much time on description. We get the basic descriptions that we need to set the scene and describe the characters appearances and that is all. That actually suits me as I don't like pages of descriptions about every room the person goes into and every piece of clothing worn by everyone etc. I like to get straight to the point of the story and this book certainly does that.
Jade is a good character. She is feisty and loyal but lives in constant fear of her evil ex Samir. By not using her magic for fear of alerting him to her location, Jade finds that she gets tired and out of shape each time she needs to use magic, which is something that I liked. The author indicates that to keep magic strong and powerful, you need to practice with it and Jade is making it harder to defend herself by not doing this. It is a nice plot twist. When she is called on to use the magic, it takes a lot of effort out of her meaning we are not just seeing an invincible witch. She is vulnerable and scared which means I could relate more to her and her situation. Alek is an interesting character. When his piercing blue eyes were mentioned I got an image in my head of Viggo Mortensen which is not a bad thing to be thinking of as you read! I liked her friends and the fact that they are gaming geeks, which was fun. I also liked that the shifters in the group were all different from each other.
The plot itself was interesting. A bad guy is draining power from shifters and planning an evil ritual that Jade and her friends have to stop. OK so there might not be anything new in that but when a story is well written you don't mind it not being original. And I thought it did deliver on plot. Jade makes an almost fatal mistake near the end which again, I liked because it is something that most people would have got wrong. I liked that she had that cowardly streak that had her thinking about running away, I liked that she was scared and did stupid things.
So what were the negatives about the book? Basically the length of it. While I was ok with the reduced description, the short book meant that the whole climax of the book was a bit rushed. I'd have liked to have seen a bit more of a tension filled ending where things are ramped up, followed by a huge magical battle. This is not what we got. It was a short rescue/fight scene which was over before it really got started which was a shame. Still, it didn't spoil my enjoyment of the story. There are also a few errors in it that a bit of proof reading would sort out ie spelling and words missing from sentences. Nothing too annoying though.
I would like to continue with the series but I refuse to pay full price for the remaining paperbacks if they are short novellas. Too many authors are doing this now, splitting a normal sized novel into three parts to get three times the amount of money from the reader. As a reader on a book budget, I won't be buying them unless they become discounted or greatly increase in size.
madgee's review against another edition
4.0
Wowza! Short but full of the good stuff. Gamer-sorceress with strange Wolf creature sidekick and the occasional heart-eating habit? Yess.
fantasyfunk's review against another edition
3.0
Fun little short story and it was a free download from B&N.
The female lead and her friends were interesting but I would have liked more depth/development in the male lead. It was hard to get a sense of anything but stone-face killer. The plot is straightforward, but it really intertwined well with developing Jade Crow's character and I liked the mix. The whole thing read a lot like a prequel to the world/characters so I'm looking forward to everything being expanded upon later.
I see lots of people rating it down just because it's short which is ridiculous. It's a short story, not a novel, and the plot/character depth coincide with that fact. Drives me crazy when people give low ratings for reasons not related to the writing. It's fine if you wish it was longer because you liked it, but don't start reading an 87 page story and think it's going to be some deep complex masterpiece. Not that short stories can't be deep and complex (in before I get links to them) so maybe I just had low expectations for this and they were easily met. =) Plus if you think it has potential then move onto the next one? /endrant
I think the next couple are pretty cheap as ebooks as well so I'll probably pick them up and see where the story goes from here.
The female lead and her friends were interesting but I would have liked more depth/development in the male lead. It was hard to get a sense of anything but stone-face killer. The plot is straightforward, but it really intertwined well with developing Jade Crow's character and I liked the mix. The whole thing read a lot like a prequel to the world/characters so I'm looking forward to everything being expanded upon later.
I see lots of people rating it down just because it's short which is ridiculous. It's a short story, not a novel, and the plot/character depth coincide with that fact. Drives me crazy when people give low ratings for reasons not related to the writing. It's fine if you wish it was longer because you liked it, but don't start reading an 87 page story and think it's going to be some deep complex masterpiece. Not that short stories can't be deep and complex (in before I get links to them) so maybe I just had low expectations for this and they were easily met. =) Plus if you think it has potential then move onto the next one? /endrant
I think the next couple are pretty cheap as ebooks as well so I'll probably pick them up and see where the story goes from here.
starlitbooknerd's review against another edition
4.0
Loved it
I thought this was a really awesome and unique story. I can't wait to see where the series ends up.
I thought this was a really awesome and unique story. I can't wait to see where the series ends up.
sammishgirl's review against another edition
2.0
This book was just okay. I enjoyed the geekery, and the world was interesting. But neither the characters nor the plot were particularly well developed. Things just happened one after another, and then it was over, without me ever feeling invested in what was happening or who it was happening to.