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3.54 AVERAGE

mou5678's review

2.0

There was no grovel. 
The mmc slept with multiple women while the fmc stayed a virgin and celibat, then claimed he loved only her


miyamiyajoy's review

4.5
emotional reflective sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

kaitlynvictorr's review

3.5
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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kiahoney's review

2.75
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Suffered from under developed writing 
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tinkchen's review

3.5
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Ok. I enjoyed the book. A few notes: this isn’t really enemies to lovers. Also, I have some issues with the following… a bit spoiler-y ahead…

The whole rejected mate thing is a bit of an exaggeration as it wasn’t deliberate. I can see how one party felt rejected, but the other party was unaware of rejecting them. There was a lack of communication that drove the majority of the conflict. If anything it seemed like Mac was the most to blame. If he hadn’t put Conner’s shirt on the table before he arrived none of this would have happened. But, again, I enjoyed the story.  

izzylax99's review

4.0
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

lydthekid's review

3.0
reflective tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: N/A
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

I was tempted to give this a one star because of the female main character. Just absolutely pathetic. Perfect example of a doormat. When will authors start writing omega women with a backbone. The male main character didn’t get nearly as much comeuppance as he deserved. The two never even directly discussed with one another the major issue in their relationship. I just shook my head the whole way through. There were also some character traits that were brought up and not carried through. Minor inconsistencies or threads dropped throughout. It was decent overall, I guess. 
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shelovesatheme's review

4.75

I wish it were longer. 🥰

valentina04's review

4.0
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
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colorcrystals's review

3.5
emotional fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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