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4.26 AVERAGE


An entertaining magic progression fantasy

I really enjoy this story. It’s a progression fantasy and has magic, supernatural creatures, believable dialogue, time travel, and a really satisfying ending (when the final arc is published).

I’ve read this 3-4 times via the web serial format and am looking forward to the entire revised version on Kindle.

superb

Excellent time travel, magic Groundhog Day , desperate fight to save a city. Please write the next book. Nobody writes better.
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The "male gaze" is really strong here. I'm also not a huge fan of the characters, I generally like more character driven narratives, and Zorian is basically the only character we get to see grow, and he's... not great. He does get better, but it's not a huge draw. And all of the other characters are EXTREMELY flat. I think I'll read the next one, because I didn't hate it, and I didn't drop it, but I'm not expecting it to be much better.
adventurous mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
adventurous funny reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
adventurous funny lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
lighthearted mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous dark funny mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Ground Hog Day meets litRPG in this initial volume of the series.

The characters are always the key element for me and watching Zach and Zorian struggle through the 30 day loop incurred when a wayward lich appears to link them in some arcane way.

Highly Recommended