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When the Moon Hatched by Sarah A. Parker

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The author does an amazing job of dropping you into this unique fae world and the beginning grips you easily. Once you get to the middle though, you're having to take more on faith in the author (there's a creature literally called a Fate Herder that seemed strategically placed) and the story. 
What is delightfully unique about this story is how the reader is not watching the beginning of a romance, but the complicated and beautiful aftermath. Have faith and if you're hooked in the beginning, be sure to read to the very last page. 

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dark emotional sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Once more this is an unfinished book without the main arc of the story being resolved which I despise. This isn't netflix or wattpad, your first story arc is supposed to be resolved within the first book. That did not happen here. I'm not even sure what the first story arc is supposed to be.

This is the setup for another epic, but considering that this book still needed 700 pages to get there and the main character doesn't show a single sign of character growth, I do not feel like forgiving the unreasonable length of this book. Perhaps if we mentioned the words pumping or skipping a beat in connotations to heart, plump, sweet tart taste of fruit or pebbling skin a few times less we could have done it in 600 pages.

The style would not have bothered me, quite the opposite, I enjoy lush and flowery prose but the endless alliterations and similes made my skin itch, to say it in her words. 

Raeve showed so little character growth and cooperation with the plot that the author had to invent an invisible cat beast called the fate herder to make her comply with the plot. That was the point where they lost me for a long while because it was so ridiculous to me. If this fate cat had literally herded anyone else it might have been cool, but this? It just served to give me justification for my dislike for Rave. I really do not like her because she kept pushing everyone away until the end. 700 pages and she hasn't listened once. At this point I wish the other characters would give up on her because this is exhausting to read.

On the other hand I enjoyed Veya and Pyrok and I have high hopes for Grim. (or whatever their names are, sorry, I listened to the audiobook) The story grew on me over time whenever it moved away and focused on another character for a while because as I said, I don't like or care for Raeve. But the second we turned to someone else? Much more interesting, especially when they weren't entirely focused on Raeve which was rare sadly. I still barely know anything about other characters but the things I heard seem promising!

So yeh, this was solidly "ok" for me and I'll give the next book a chance.

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Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I cannot begin to describe how much I loved this book. The world felt so full and magical. Sometimes fantasy's that have strong romance storylines fall flat in other areas but I didn't feel like that with this story. I cannot wait for the next book to come out! 

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Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The trigger warnings for the audiobook are read at the end, not very helpful. As well, the character list download from the publisher is only mentioned at the end of the book as well. 

The book started off slow and the world building was a bit awkward until you get into the rhythm of the book and the setup gets going but that takes over a good 1/4 of the book to get there, give it a chance. I read a character and brief plot summary from Crew Fiction.com that didn’t have too many spoilers but also helped me with placing everything in context in the audiobook not having a print copy character list to reference. It made me want to continue reading and I was assured readers are mixed in their like/dislike of this book. 

It was worthwhile to persevere and I’ll be reading the sequel. The world building is interesting once you get further, way further in.

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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Great book! I had trouble putting it down. Twists and turns are all over the place. 

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Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Very poetic, though the prose can cause strong emotions, confusion, or just plain annoyance. 

Lots happens in this book for very little main plot. More character-driven without there being any redeemable growth or character change really. Things were said to the main character that could have brought that growth but there was always just this “You need to know this important thing but I won’t actually tell you” I’m assuming it’s reserved for the second book as it’s never followed through. Story plot she wants to do this thing>>>is unsuccessful ends up in prison>>>
Gets rescued
>>> thinks about thing for 500 pages but only like a sentence at a time every 30 pages or so (likely to remind the reader that that is the characters main goal and not all the other stuff she’s doing)>>>Does the thing and somehow there’s no actual conclusion with it because
she doesn’t know she is the one doing it since she’s taken over by her other personality


World building is only confusing I think because it’s magical. It’s a very interesting concept of how the world works but since it wouldn’t work that way on a liveable planet it’s confusing to our brains. 

Overall it was enjoyable, so 3 stars and an additional half star because while the poetic-ness of it was a bit much at times, it worked well in the exciting scenes
(fighting and fucking)
to help you visualize. 

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Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

OMG... dieses Buch hat eine obsession in mir ausgelöst - es ist nicht mehr normal😭

Erstens: Das Worldbuilding?! omfg, so ein interessantes Konzept! Die Lore, die Wesen, die CHARAKTERE?!! I ate every single bit of this book up!

KAAN VAEGORR... HELLOO?! Dieser Mann gibt mir so krasse Lorcan (ToG) Vibes, it's unbearable😭😭



Any lost opportunity to worship you is a tragedy.

...I SAT.


Hopefully werden die nächsten Bücher ein bisschen actionreicher - im ganzweltlichen Konflikt, denn tbh hatte ich das Gefühl, das Buch hat nur an der Oberfläche gekratzt, was mich excited für den nächsten Teil macht☝️



Mini Kritik: Manche Konflikte (Raeve 'accepting' that she's Elluin) wurden mir einen Ticken zu schnell gelöst🥲, das mit Kyzari war a little bit obvious, nichtsdestotrotz war ich geschockt, und anfangs war mir die Obsession von Kaan auch ein bisschen too much😔✊️ (hat sich aber später gelegt hihii)



Ansonsten aber wirklich tipitopi💗💗

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