3.51 AVERAGE


This was a cute story. Some patterns I'm seeing from the Manga genre so far:

Usually one character has anger issues. They seem to always be yelling at the person they like. Strange and not really attractive. The pacing moves extremely fast and they sort of gloss over connecting moments. Characters aren't usually very in depth. This book fit into all those things.

I did like both love interests here. The setting is Japan and one MC owns a Western sweet shop and the other MC owns a Japanese traditional sweet shop. They are both good looking and popular places in the same block. At first they start out as competition and then become friends.

Again, this is a cute story. I feel like it could have been more developed. I guess they want to keep the page count around 130 pages. This is why novels are better, you get to know a character so much more. If a picture is worth a thousand words, you would think they could tell some interesting details but I've seen it work on rarely in Manga so far.
lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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DID NOT FINISH: 0%

too much french and the eyes freaked me out
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

There's no point in beating around the bush. Everything was great until chapter 4.

Sure, there was a singular incident where one character kissed another character without asking and that didn't feel too good to read, but it led to a conversation about biphobia and bi acceptance which I felt was pretty solid despite how rushed it was. Honestly, the pacing isn't super great in general, but I was willing to accept that for the first three chapters simply because I can understand the limit to telling a whole story in that short amount of time and what I did get to see caught my interest.

And then chapter 4 starts with a character stating upfront that he doesn't want to consume alcohol. Great! A boundary has been established! But unfortunately, his partner is horny and anyone who is familiar enough with the tropes of the genre knows exactly where this is going. His partner makes the entirely grotesque decision to spike some chocolates with the specific intention of getting him drunk enough to coerce him into sex. That did not have to be the plot of this chapter. They could have had a conversation about it. Heck, if the spiked chocolate had been a mutually consensual part of their foreplay, even that would have been fine! While I can't say that the way this trope was executed here is as bad as other BL my eyes have had the misfortune of seeing, I also can't say it's excusable and it spoiled the experience of an otherwise sweet relationship for me.

Aside from that, the characters are mostly fun and likeable, the art style is very cute, and the sweets really make me wish I could see those pages in color! Even the few side characters we see are pretty enjoyable. My favorite is Miyamori, who seems super invested in his boss' life and well-being. The plot of the first three chapters and the bonus one-shots at the end is cute, mostly sweet, and a good balance of light angst and fluff. It cannot be overstated just how jarring the tonal shift of chapter 4 really is. So, brace yourself... or just skip it and enjoy the lighthearted story beats leading up to and following it like I plan to do upon any further rereads.

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funny hopeful lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

A short and cute lighthearted story. Very nice :)

funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
adventurous emotional funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Aww I simply loved this manga!! The premise was so sweet!! I also can never resist a good rivals to love trop and it nailed that aspect! Along with that trope, the bakery/sweet shop setting was so delicious!! The art style was well done and captured the characters, their emotions as well as the baked goods!!!
funny lighthearted fast-paced