4.21 AVERAGE


Baby version of Deja's heartbreaking foster kid plotline on This Is Us.

After an incident involving her mother and new step-father, which ends with a stay in the hospital, 12-year-old Carley Connors finds herself in foster care with the Murphy family. Carley is suspicious of this happy family (do happy families actually exist?), and jealous of the love and care that the three Murphy boys receive from their loving parents. Mrs. Murphy tries very hard to make Carley feel safe, important, and loved, and eventually Carley’s defenses come down; she comes to care for all of the Murphys and feels like she could really find a place in their home, as a member of their family. Carley’s new-found happiness and relief gets thrown into a tailspin when she learns some news from her mother. Will Carley return to her mother and stepfather? Will she stay with the Murphys? Carley has worked so hard to finally feel safe and happy—are all her efforts about to be undone?
informative medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This book had high hopes. I didn't enjoy the flow of the story. I wish there was a bit more story and less dialog.

This is a great book. It shows many problems: child abuse, friendship, bullying, and siblings. Child abuse may be the main problem, but underneath that there are many short-term and even long-term problems that Carly has to deal with, making this seem incredibly like real life. Carly lived in Las Vegas, with her mom. Her mom married, the man she married being very abusive to the both of them. One day, Carly taunts her mom's husband, expecting that if he hits her, her mom would come to the rescue. She encounters a surprise: her mom holds her down to allow him to hit her. This betrayal leaves Carly confused. After going to the hospital for her wounds, she is put into Foster care- with the Murphys. Most of them are welcoming, but Daniel is not. One of the first things he says to her is "Just because your mom doesn't want you doesn't mean that you can take mine". Carly begins to fall in love with the Murphys, and even becomes friends with Daniel. But, then something comes that disturbs what had become Carly's perfect life-- her mom gets better. This causes Carly to fall into a cascade of horrible choices to make. The Murphys or her mom is one of her major choices. In the end, she does choose her mom. That part, the ending, might be the one thing that I kind of don't like about this book-- I think that the author could have listed the reasons why she chose her mom, as I never really got that.
There are many plots twists and fluxations, as Carly tries to navigate a world completely different from her own.


I would suggest this to kids and teens, no matter what their background is. A reasonable read for an adult, too, as it can give a doorway into a kids mind, as well as just be entertaining.


It's worthy of it 4.5, but I can only give it a 4!
emotional funny hopeful inspiring sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

One for the Murphys is about a girl, Carley, who is taken away from her mother and put into foster care. It follows her journey with this family in Connecticut and discovering what she wants in life. 
If you want a feel-good book that's easy to read, this would be a great choice! The writing isn't difficult to read, or too long, but is still written is a way that is good for the reader's imagination. The way Carley feels at times can be very relatable and accurate, whether you are a foster kid or not. 
This book is a great getaway if you are really busy and want something quick and easy! I would also recommend this book if you are a social worker or a foster parent and want to get into the heads of people you are helping.

Carley Connors can’t believe what’s happening. Even though she has a mother, she’s being driven by a social worker to be placed with a foster family! The Murphys seem very kind and welcoming, especially Mrs. Murphy – but Carley is suspicious; no one has ever been this nice before. Will Carley ever find home again?

This book was a very emotional read. I found Carley to be a very real kid, perhaps a bit wiser than her years based on the tough life she has experienced thus far. I appreciated that not all the kids in the house immediately took to Carley, because that’s more realistic. Carley has a lot of growth emotionally in the brief time she spends with the Murphys, but it seemed like something that could happen.

Two things did bother me about this book, however. The social worker, Mrs. McAvoy, seems to consider Carley a hindrance, and has no interest in developing a relationship with her. That’s the whole point of social workers; yes, they are very busy and overstaffed, but I don’t think that she would have only made a home visit because Carley called. There should have been scheduled home visits the entire time she was there, just to check on things.

The second thing was the assumption that Carley would just go back with her mother. No one asked her what she wanted. It’s obvious that her mother, even though she was also beaten by Dennis, was attempting to assist in Carley’s beating (she grabs her daughter’s foot on that fateful night, so that Dennis can catch her). Even though the charges against her were dropped, I would hope that a real-life situation like this would at least involve some counseling, or supervised visits, or some sort of step program, rather than just throwing Carley back with her mother, who’s going to immediately spirit her out of Connecticut, where she has made friends and connections, and take her back to Las Vegas, where it will be “just like before.” Yes, before Carley understood how families can be, where they can argue and still love each other, and they stick together no matter what.

Overall, it was well-written, but a flawed story.

Probably more like 3.5 stars. Definitely one I'd put on my classroom shelf if I were still teaching middle school. Character growth; good lesson.

What a fantastic book! My daughter and I literally devoured this book and read it in just a few sittings. Carley was such a character and that family, oh my heart, and her birth mother, gah! This book really tugged at our hearts. I would absolutely recommend it- this is a life my child does not know, thankfully, and yet is all too common and it made for great talking points.

I will say I appreciated one reviewer's comments (Shelley) all about the social worker's perspective and what this book truly lacked- because it did skim over quite a bit. That review shared amazing insight as to the reality of it all (like how social workers don't actually disappear like the one in this book did, not to mention all the emotional work/rehab and so forth the birth mother should have done, etc, and the attachment disorders Carley is likely to face and all). Read that review for more information, truly.

In any case, this really was a well written book, with whip smart dialogue and excellent pacing and character development. We look forward to more from this author!!


Review to come.