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All I Need

E. Salvador

3.87 AVERAGE


Really cute book, im a sucker for the pregnancy trope.  

I love  all  the  characters , the  leaving  and  the  orgasm  of the  Love story. It just needed way more editing. So many weird sentences and the denouement was SO long for no obvious reason. 
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
emotional lighthearted
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
emotional lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Loved how realistic and mature a lot of Lola and TJ's conversations were. The whole cast of characters were pretty likeable.

Some things I would've loved to see further developed/discuss:
- TJs tattoo because we moved on really quickly 
- Lola seeking some sort of counseling help for all she's been through
- Alexia and TJ having a conversation where TJ crushes her dreams a bit more explicitly
- Characters making actual mistakes because they aren't perfect. For example, TJ took onto fatherhood like a flame to a house but it would've been super interesting to see him not be this perfect egoistical guy in that moment. Yeah sure he told us and Lola that he was super anxious but I feel like a lot of his flaws were pretty sanitized (as was Lola's).
emotional funny hopeful tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
emotional funny reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
lighthearted relaxing medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
emotional funny tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

The plot was good but there were grammar and spelling mistakes. The way the author wrote was a little hard to follow at times