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3.69 AVERAGE

dark

Some nice prose and quite gruesome imagery. But overall I am left wanting a little more plot and world building. 
adventurous dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
dark mysterious
dark mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
dark mysterious tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
dark emotional mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

This horror (short story?) fairytale about a mermaid and a witch doctor just absolutely butchering a cult of children is so nauseatingly verbose I was constantly pulled out of the melodramatic, eerie stage. Complaints about verbose writing...coming from me? Yes, because I like sticky sweet prose, but Cassandra: not every. single. word has to be unique and out of a thesaurus. Are you out of your goddamn mind? At a certain point, describing every detail and action with words no human being has ever actually written or uttered became hilarious to me. I was in sheer disbelief at this continued bit (and yes I see it as a bit, not as an academic flair or writing style. No one writes like that.) Anyway. This has a lot of slippery surgery, crunching, wet gore and stringy disemboweling. Dude I don't know man...uh, love persists?
slow-paced
dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
adventurous dark mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No