4.29 AVERAGE

dark emotional reflective sad tense medium-paced
dark emotional reflective slow-paced

Content: ***
Length: ****
Writing: ****

From the ebook:

I'm becoming more of a vessel of memories than a person
It's a myth that love lives in the heart
it lives in the throat we push it out
when we speak 
when we gasp we take a little for ourselves

*****

I am not a slow learner
I am a quick forgetter
such ereasing makes one voracious
if you teach me something beautiful I will name it quickly before it floats away 

tneh's review

5.0
emotional sad

soul-shattering loveliness abound!!!!!
emotional hopeful inspiring reflective sad

 I lack nothing I need
unless you count everything I want     I’m meant
to be spreading tenderness over the earth like seeds
like worms     instead I’ve been shoveling coal
into burning houses



i dont have good enough words. GAH
challenging dark emotional reflective sad medium-paced
emotional hopeful reflective sad
fast-paced

Despite reading this collection over a dozen times over, it is still what I reach for when I am in need. In need of tenderness, of haunting vulnerability, of being seen. Kaveh's poetry sits so well with me, I can't even really call this a review more than a raving. Over all this time, I'm still not quite sure what to say except that every time I pick up this collection, I am grateful I did. Kaveh transforms even the most mundane into meaningful fascination through vivid imagery as he navigates addiction, craving, God, and culture. Paired with his spiraling writing style, these poems read like evocation magic to me, stirring the most gentle feelings of yearning and sorrow. I am humbled and forever in awe by Kaveh's words.