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3.94 AVERAGE
3.94 AVERAGE
What the fuck was the ending of this book?
She is a goddess? But doesn't know it. It seemed like a cop out.
Anyways. Putting my thoughts on that aside, this book was not good. It started out interesting and like it was going to be better than the first one. I liked seeing how Thane and Layala were going to meet back up after being separated at the end of the first book.
But the writing quickly went down hill. I felt like the author lost the character sheets that they had for each character. It felt like everyone was a different person. Their actions and dialogue was constantly contradicting how they were established in the first book. And then they were contradicted again. All in all, it felt like a very lazily done novel.
There was also once again an issue with the length of the book. On Kindle Unlimited, this book is listed to have 538 pages. And I feel like for about half of that, nothing was happening. And then one third of the remaining 269 pages were poorly written smut scenes that were uncomfortable to read at best.
This is a 1.5 star read.
She is a goddess? But doesn't know it. It seemed like a cop out.
Anyways. Putting my thoughts on that aside, this book was not good. It started out interesting and like it was going to be better than the first one. I liked seeing how Thane and Layala were going to meet back up after being separated at the end of the first book.
But the writing quickly went down hill. I felt like the author lost the character sheets that they had for each character. It felt like everyone was a different person. Their actions and dialogue was constantly contradicting how they were established in the first book. And then they were contradicted again. All in all, it felt like a very lazily done novel.
There was also once again an issue with the length of the book. On Kindle Unlimited, this book is listed to have 538 pages. And I feel like for about half of that, nothing was happening. And then one third of the remaining 269 pages were poorly written smut scenes that were uncomfortable to read at best.
This is a 1.5 star read.
adventurous
medium-paced
Loveable characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
i don’t know how to feel about that one.
Its an „amazing idea, that didn’t get written the way i needed it to be written“ kinda situation for me.
The pacing was still off somehow and those 500 pages dragged on for a damn while.
I feel like the entire story would have gotten better justice if it (including the to be punished third book) was shortened into two books. Whilst it’s super intriguing and investing in its idea, it all is too slow to keep me invested.
I would absolutely devour and adore these books if it weren’t for that pacing. I got bored often, because parts just drag on too long whilst nothing is progressing.
And other parts just happen too fast and get cut short that would have needed some more pages. Like the entire chaos that was the last 100 pages?
I am not sure if I’m a fan of that plot twist. It feels kinda like a „lets just completely random change things up to create a new plot“ situation.
Maybe cutting that new plot aspect and just giving the characters their deserved Happy End would have been better?
Overall a good series with great entertaining characters and plot. It has banter, it has companionship and all the mystical and exciting aspects we love in a good fantasy book.
But the length and pacing kills off all excitement I could feel.
Don’t get me wrong, I had fun reading. Like I said, in theory it’s an amazing book that I would love.
But the amount of pages I was able to read through in one sitting was way less than my normal attention span.
If it weren’t for that damn weird cliffhanger, I probably wouldn’t continue with the series. But things got extremely weird and I need to know how the author plans on continuing on from there on.
3
Its an „amazing idea, that didn’t get written the way i needed it to be written“ kinda situation for me.
The pacing was still off somehow and those 500 pages dragged on for a damn while.
I feel like the entire story would have gotten better justice if it (including the to be punished third book) was shortened into two books. Whilst it’s super intriguing and investing in its idea, it all is too slow to keep me invested.
I would absolutely devour and adore these books if it weren’t for that pacing. I got bored often, because parts just drag on too long whilst nothing is progressing.
And other parts just happen too fast and get cut short that would have needed some more pages. Like the entire chaos that was the last 100 pages?
I am not sure if I’m a fan of that plot twist. It feels kinda like a „lets just completely random change things up to create a new plot“ situation.
Maybe cutting that new plot aspect and just giving the characters their deserved Happy End would have been better?
Overall a good series with great entertaining characters and plot. It has banter, it has companionship and all the mystical and exciting aspects we love in a good fantasy book.
But the length and pacing kills off all excitement I could feel.
Don’t get me wrong, I had fun reading. Like I said, in theory it’s an amazing book that I would love.
But the amount of pages I was able to read through in one sitting was way less than my normal attention span.
If it weren’t for that damn weird cliffhanger, I probably wouldn’t continue with the series. But things got extremely weird and I need to know how the author plans on continuing on from there on.
3
It was bad. I’ve never struggled through a book so much in my entire life. The story line had a lot of promise, but the writing was terrible. The plot was slow, the “twists” were predictable, and the dialogue was so cringey. Over all it felt like it was written by middle schooler.
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
adventurous
mysterious
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
WHAT A TWIST
Omg when will the next book come out?!?!! I need it asap
Omg when will the next book come out?!?!! I need it asap
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
tense
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Complicated
adventurous
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
adventurous
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes