3.79 AVERAGE

adventurous challenging fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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plaidparadise77's review

3.75
challenging dark emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced

mrazurefox's review

5.0
challenging dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Fantastic & quick read.

Absolute slay
dark mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

3.5 stars

nathi_'s review

3.5
challenging dark emotional reflective sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

The writing is excellent and the core idea intriguing. But the ending is unsatisfying (not so much so as to ruin the novella, unlike some other TOR shorts), and a pivotal scene is entirely depended on the premise that Molly's parents wouldn't have explained menstruation to her before it actually started. Given Molly's condition, that is extremely implausible.

bookish_brittany's review

4.0

Creepy, but in the way that makes you curious and want to keep reading.