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186 reviews for:

When it Raynes

Montana Fyre

3.64 AVERAGE

paolahenonin's review

2.5
challenging dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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__frozenrobot__'s review

4.75
dark emotional mysterious tense fast-paced

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klouiseg's review

4.5
dark emotional tense fast-paced
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jbskat's review

3.5
emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

danette's review

5.0
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

It’s about Rayne who is apart of the mafia in Chicago and Emerson who is a troubled girl who works at a youth center. Super cute book love love love them sm!!!!!!! Very fast paced like I’m talking married in a month.

norahmoh's review

0.5
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

beereina's review

2.5

2.5⭐️
Read to me by Alexa
🌶️🌶️.5 - for frequency once it gets going and some dirty talk. But it’s vanilla.

The first word that comes to my mind is “basic” if you’ve read a handful of mafia romances…. You’ve already read this one. 

Rayne is the enforcer of an organization with criminal ties. He meets Emerson and decides it’s love at first sight. Emerson is your typical good girl, though not virginal. 

Rayne pursues her in typical obsessive fashion. “You’re mine now and your stuff will be here by morning.” 

And Emerson gives the typical response “I can’t stay here and I’m going to throw a fit because if I didn’t there would be no story. But duh I’m obviously delighted to be pseudo kidnapped by a hot crime lord”

 Some relationship growing pains. She’s threatened. He saves her. They live HEA… the end. 

I honesty only gave this more than one star because I did get to the end with heavy skimming and it’s not the author’s fault that I’ve read like 50 of these stories already. 

So if you’re new to mafia romance with an OTT. J/P male and sweet heroine….. there are better ones out there. But this isn’t a bad one to get your toes wet. 

The writing is a bit repetitive and if I read “sweet girl” one more time I might have thrown up in my mouth…. 

abbiel's review

3.0
tense fast-paced
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tej_reads's review

DID NOT FINISH: 56%

CBA with this.

amzyrebecca's review

3.0
dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character