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Torment: Part Two by Dylan Page

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hilary89's review

5.0
challenging dark emotional mysterious reflective sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This is my first 5 star read of 2025, but god did it gut me. I'm still processing what I just read and may come back to edit this review later, but here are my thoughts for now. I'm struggling with whether or not this qualifies as a romance... even as a dark romance. I'm not someone that needs every story tied up with a bow in a perfect HEA at the ending, but I do feel like a romance needs some sort of satisfying conclusion. Shay's ending (which was perfectly done with his POV) was tragic, but it did give him some degree of redemption. The fact that he made the ultimate sacrifice so that Mina could live on is beautiful in its own tragic way. 

But what I can't get past is how fundamentally abusive Shay and Mina's relationship was. I think what it really comes down to is that Mina was completely stripped of her agency by Shay's controlling nature. While I do think she loved him as a brother throughout, I was never convinced that she had truly fallen in love with him because the circumstances he forced her into prevented her from making her own decisions. Perhaps if Shay didn't have so many demons (poor boy just needed some damn therapy) and had allowed her to come to him on his own, that would have been romantic. But the horrific things he did to Mina and those around her prevented her from ever being able to love him in the way he wanted.

I know in dark romance we toe the line with romanticizing abusive behavior, but I think the key is whether or not both parties have enough agency to express themselves genuinely. In this case, with Mina having been groomed by Shay from the time she was a young girl, I don't think she had - or was given - the agency to truly love him. 

I think if it were to be a true romance, it would have focused on Mina and Keenan's forbidden love. We got a hint of their HEA in the epilogue that was very satisfying. I'm really hoping we get more peaks into their lives after the events of this duology in future books.

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macy_h's review

4.5
challenging dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

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dark emotional sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

 I understand why people have a hard time explaining this duet. It's really not a romance. It's a dark, emotional, contemporary book. Dealing with heavy content such as sexual assault, murder, and medical content. The FMC is having a hard time dealing with her life and we're past the time when she idolized her stepbrother and stepdad. She's now realizing that she's stuck here and no matter what she does her stepbrother will never let her go. Things do get really graphic in here and although there is an ending in here it's a pretty sad one. It's just a very emotional read and at times super hard to read because it is so graphic. I do really wish we had dual POVs or even got into Shay and Keenan's POVs in this one. 

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Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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alyshabraun's review

4.5
dark emotional sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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jessanicolesingh's review

4.0
dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This series was pretty devastating đź’” It was incredibly well written, but gut wrenching and comfortable. The subject matter is not for a light reader, and though there were themes in line with dark romance, I don’t think I would fit the duet into that category. You don’t root for the “main couple”, but rather obsess with the toxicity as the car accident unfolds. 

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amylferg's review

5.0
challenging dark emotional hopeful sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I don’t know what to say aside from READ THESE FUCKING BOOKS! 

Dylan has woven such a complex and intricate story of tragedy, love and loss and the fall out of poor human decisions and selfishness. 

The love in this story is, above everything, toxic. But so complicated at the same time. You KNOW you shouldn’t be rooting for multiple outcomes but the way this story sucks you in and complicates your morals, it’s like as a reader you’re being just as manipulated as the characters in this story. 

There’s a small excerpt at the end where the author says many readers might be upset at the ending. It ended exactly as it needed to, in my opinion. I am a reader that usually loves an epilogue that beautifully wraps up the story where everyone gets their HEA. But this story isn’t necessarily beautiful and these characters got exactly the ending they were meant to. 

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kyras_reads's review

5.0
challenging dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This book, this duet, is I like anything I’ve ever read and it both made me question my own sanity and broke my freaking heart. 

First and foremost, although Mina got to have an ending that involved a better and more stable life, my head is swimming with questions I don’t know if I’ll ever get answered. But, that’s life, as the author said… 

Mina is strong, that much I learned. And she is a victim but also a survivor. Her childhood was stolen from her by selfish people and she was manipulated and isolated so much so that she thought she experienced love the way other people do. 

I’m glad we got some answers on Keenan and his… motivations for being her friend for all of those years because I was suspicious. I love that they ended up together and I’m not even that upset that more of Key wasn’t included in the story. It wasn’t about him… 

Shay… the most conflicted I have ever felt about a fictional character. I had a small, I mean small, inkling that he could be responsible for her mothers death but I thought I was just being paranoid. Just horrific, honestly. How is a person so awful, so tender and loving sometimes? But that is why illness is absolutely heartbreaking and Shay really was like two very different people. 

Did I ever root for them to come out of this a couple and together? No. Did I want to see Mina get out and thrive? Yes. Did I also want Shay to have a redemption arc of some kind? Yes. And… I got what I wanted, in a way. The most selfless thing he ever did was take himself out of the equation. It absolutely shattered my heart even though I had been bracing for it since the end of Part One, because how else could this end in a way that didn’t include him chasing Mina down relentlessly for the rest of her life? She was never going to be safe or live a normal life with him… alive. That doesn’t mean it didn’t hurt. 

The epilogue SET. ME. OFF. 
We didn’t even get her perspective. Or even Key’s?! Ugh. And then to find out about their son. That always punches me in the gut. Because coming from a child of parents with mental illnesses, including schizophrenia, it is never ideal but… the thought of Shay never finding out about his child broke me a second time. 

He was a horrific human being and a sadistic man but he loved Mina in the only way he was capable and that is real, even if these characters weren’t. 

I love to find books that break me and put me back together. Unfortunately, this is not that. This broke me, it really did. But I don’t know if I’ll ever be fully put back together after this. 

And l know I will forever cry when listening to “The Night We Met” after this.

Tropes:
Taboo-Forbidden
Step-Siblings
Age-Gap

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challenging dark emotional mysterious sad tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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