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sunspinner730's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
Moderate: Sexual content
Minor: Fatphobia
thecharnelraven's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Moderate: Sexual content
asparagusisreading's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Infidelity, Toxic relationship, Cursing, and Mental illness
Moderate: Car accident, Body shaming, and Sexual content
fanboyriot's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Mental illness
Moderate: Cursing, Sexual content, Infidelity, Toxic relationship, and Car accident
Minor: Fatphobia, Body shaming, and Alcohol
shelvesofivy's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
There were times where I wanted to shake certain characters by the shoulders because of their hypocrisy. I think I'm also a little bit upset that
All of that said, I love that we have nonbinary and fat MCs, I love fake dating stories, and I love the ways this reminded me of Aquamarine. Unrelated, but the cover art is also so lovely and a huge reason I got this book in the first place.
Minor: Sexual content, Infidelity, and Mental illness
offbrandclubsoda's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Moderate: Infidelity, Sexual content, Car accident, and Cursing
Minor: Mental illness and Transphobia
littlesmaug's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
The ending itself could have been expanded on more, as well. How did that epilogue come to be?
I dunno, it just wasn’t that PUNCH of a book I was expecting it to be. Still a cute little read though!
Since it’s not an option on storygraph, tw for mentions of cheating
Minor: Sexual content
cassielaj's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
I will say, the fat rep in this is fantastic
Moderate: Cursing, Infidelity, Mental illness, and Sexual content
dryadsreadingnook's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
What I loved:
- A non-binary main character!
- An actual considered approach to what it would mean for a mermaid to remain on land.
- The ending & the message
you can’t build your life around someone else! Especially not someone you just met!! - Kavya. Just everything about her — the “funny side character who snaps the main character out of their selfish nonsense” but with more dimensions. Honestly, I would take a book with her as the main character any day.
- Characterisation felt a little inconsistent. Some motivations for the way characters acted came across as an afterthought by the writer (trying to avoid spoilers so won’t go into depth!)
- On a similar point, some plot points also felt as if they came from nowhere, and I felt as if they disrupted the flow of the narrative.
- A little TMI re: sexual attraction. The POV characters get turned on at every little thing, and it felt like a bit much at times (I’m asexual so maybe this is normal for allo folks lol).
Moderate: Mental illness
Minor: Sexual content
A side character has depression, which isn’t seen by the POV character, but is described to them by another character. There’s some mild sexual content - nothing graphic (it’s still a YA novel!). They’re both underage, but it’s fully consentual.sssssoup's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Things I liked:
-The casual representation was really nice to see
-I thought the world building with the merfolk and their culture was interesting and pretty well done. I especially liked the stuff about gender
-I liked Crest’s exploration of gender presentation
-It was a pretty fun and quick read
-The portrayal of teenagers felt pretty realistic. Teenagers make a lot of stupid choices, as did the characters in this book (I myself am a teenager)
Things I didn’t like:
-Personally, I found all the mer-slang to be cringy and overused
-The extent of Crest’s confusion about human culture didn’t make sense to me. They supposedly took human culture classes for years, yet they didn’t know how to cross the street or open a door? Also, in one of the first chapters, it says that Crest has mer magic to help them understand human things if they get confused, but it’s only used one time and never mentioned again?
-I was uncomfortable with how much the teenaged characters talked about sex-related topics (I myself am a teenager and I thought it was weird). It’s not bad to have teenage characters who aren’t ashamed of being horny or anything, but I felt like Sean and Crest were often reduced to their sexual attraction and I found it took away from the other more important parts of their characters. I also didn’t like how their relationship was built so heavily on physicality and lust, yet they kept talking about how they were in love
-The pacing was also off in my opinion, especially toward the end. It felt like the author kept adding in more and more things just to add to the drama of the situations. I saw another reviewer who said that they should’ve focused in on a few things instead of having so many, and I’m inclined to agree
Overall, it was a fun, quick read that you don’t have to think too much about, but I was disappointed because I didn’t love it like I thought I would. I don’t hate it, but I definitely won’t be recommending it to anyone either.
Moderate: Cursing, Infidelity, Sexual content, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Body shaming, Grief, Vomit, Panic attacks/disorders, Alcohol, Blood, and Mental illness