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Untouchable

Sam Mariano

3.79 AVERAGE


First of all, this is a believable story. We see it happening in the news and on TV all the time. Guys that won't take no for an answer. It was uncomfortable in the beginning and I thought that Zoey was insane for some of the decisions she made.
It was sexual assault, and I think it was more upsetting because of the age of the kids and if that were me at that age I would be devastated.
Most of us have probably been in that situation where you put all your trust in the guy and alcohol is very bad in those situations.
I was a little bored in the middle and expected it to be darker. I don't think young girls should be reading something like this. What Carter does is NOT ok.

For sure like 3.5-4 stars. This book is very very QUESTIONABLE. I can see why there are mixed reviews. Overall, it kept me entertained until the end and that’s what we like.

- Main Couple: Carter/Zoey
- Book Playlist (Bully Romance Playlist)


When I first picked up this book I definitely wasn’t expecting it to be like this. I saw that it was a bully romance and expected it to be of a similar vein as Fear Me by B.B. Reid (which I liked).

However, this one is quite different and not as angsty as I was expecting for a bully romance (if you can call this a bully romance). I’m hesitant to even call this a bully romance because the bully portion of the book is quite short at the beginning. Carter doesn’t spend years or even months bullying Zoey. But I will say that their first “interaction” is going to piss off and turn off A LOT of people. Because he basically forces her to give him a blowjob….

Now, if you have any triggers about rape then definitely stay away. But if you stick with the book and you’re the type of person who can forgive a character for basically any indiscretion, then you’re in for a real treat with this book. It’s fun, funny, sexy, sweet, romantic, and basically all the things you’d want in a romance.

Zoey is a very strong heroine. She has what I would consider the perfect personality for a heroine. She’s not annoying and she has a good balance between being strong and knowing her own limits. She doesn’t really care what other people think about her and that makes her an incredibly interesting and attractive person. It’s what draws Carter to her and opens the door for an amazing relationship between the two. And can I just say that I love that she isn’t against accepting gifts and financial help from Carter. She’s not a gold digger, but I love that she wasn’t too proud to allow him to show his love in this way.

Carter (despite his initial indiscretions) has a lot of layers and hiding he’s doing from the world. Zoey manages to peel back these layers and underneath we find a man who has darkness inside, but he also loves passionately and with his entire being. He’s very intelligent and knows how to use the resources he has (looks, popularity, money) to get what he wants. But when he loves someone, he is generous and extends those benefits to the one he loves. He can be a total asshole to those who piss him off, but call me crazy, I actually liked this about him. He’s also probably a bonafide sociopath (or at the very least a narcissist), but he’s OUR narcissistic sociopath. Lol

Together, Zoey and Carter are on fire. Their banter is heartwarming and fun. Their relationship is deep and layered. And their sex is hot and steamy. The relationship building was phenomenally done and I really felt them growing as friends, then lovers, and then as gf/bf. Loved seeing the growth! It was so fun and sweet.

There are lots of things to love about this book. It turned out to be a favorite with some new favorite characters for me. But it’s not for everyone. Beyond the initial sexual assault, the hero does some other controlling things (which you either like or don’t), they get into some other mild rape play fantasies which I know isn’t for everyone. I liked it personally, but I know not everyone is into that.

Overall I loved the book. Such a great story. Most of it is actually quite light and fun with tons of hilarious witty banter between the two (loved this). But there are some darker threads that could be triggers for some people. Proceed with caution, but if those aren’t an issue for you then you might just love this book.
challenging dark funny tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Woo this was a dark bully romance. Although the bully fell rather quick and didn't bully for long, he did sexually assault her though. Yet I'm blind to the red flags 🤭 he became obsessed, she gave no shits and made it very obvious she wanted nothing to do with him and then only wanted his top tier dick game 🥵 I loved it, couldn't put it down. Banter was great at breaking up the tension 
Carter Mahoney and Zoey
adventurous challenging dark fast-paced
Diverse cast of characters: No

DNF at 11%. I just can't do this kind of story atm.
dark emotional hopeful reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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I really liked the story but my lord! So much thinking and analyzing!! I could have done without at least a 1/3 of this book.

Carter quickly became chef's kisses

The opening chapters of this book really set up the rest of Carter and Zoey's story. There will definitely be triggers for some readers.

Unlike other bully books, this one escalated quickly, but then I wondered where it would go from there. I was pleasantly surprised by the pace and tone of the book and just adored Carter and Zoey together. She understood him so well, and I liked that she wasn't blind to his faults and just excused them. I really liked how Carter was depicted throughout as it kept giving glimpses of the man he was.

Such an enjoyable reach, and I just kept wanting more. I'm moving onto Hunter and Riley's book, hoping to get some more Carter and Zoey's.
dark tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

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