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Mind Fuck by Manna Francis

that was a looong and tenuous case. toreth was a fun character to follow. dark but fun. he’s defiantly a dark almost black grey character. walrick is def a grey character that tries to do right but is kinda failing by entangling himself with toreth and his work.

back to the case. i think the reason it dragged was for world building. with how it dragged the reader got to learn the terms, divisions and this dystopian world which understandable since dumping all that on us in the beginning would’ve been a head ache. i will say i don’t know how most of the characters look. esp sara!

anyway i’ll cont. this v diff than what i usually read since toreth is a character i have issues with. a lot of them

dude ask his employee to suck him off?!?!?! and did it again after he basically fired him????he’s not okay…i would say walrick run but we have plenty of books proving he doesn’t so yeah.

i’m basic person who like to follow characters i like but i want challenge that.

Tink by Emmy Sanders
Did not finish book. Stopped at 44%.

there relationship trajectory is like you in and yeah. that’s it. the whole point of a poly romance is how it’s navigated and sure sim ppl might have it easy like this. it just doesn’t make good story. especially when i’m not big fan of smut with ni romance building. also no chemistry. they keep telling me how they are into each other and it’s like uhm sure…

Pies and Promises by Duckie Mack
Did not finish book. Stopped at 15%.

i don’t know if it’s the narration or me but the guys kinda sound like teenagers.

Bruised But Not Broken by Nicole Dykes
Did not finish book. Stopped at 29%.

hmmm idk i’m thrown into a lot trauma but i find myself rolling my eyes at how ben reacts to it. i know it’s supposed show how ben takes care of him. however if the root of the issue is he likes taking of ppl why does it start and end with ppl he is romantically into. why hasn’t looked into organization of victims of abuse if he is passionate about it? i know trauma can show up diff ways in ppls life. using it for romance to me require more character building than just telling me. it’s not clicking for me.

A Love Made Whole by Kate Hawthorne

as sweet as this was at times i’m more aware of how these three work sexually than emotionally. it needed more romance building. emory basically meets each guy twice individually outside work and then boom their together. hell i don’t even know why the two husbands used to work. obviously they love each other i just didn’t see how we got there. every time jump lead to another sex scene.

Triple Trouble by Jesse H Reign

i enjoyed reading this. it had funny and warm moments. i think troubles reasoning were kinda stupid. i definitely preferred mat and will more. i wish we had more quiet getting to know each other moments instead of smut. i legit had skip some of it bec it was too much at times but that new to me. all in all it was okay and enjoyed it.

The Step Bro Situation by Jesse H Reign
Did not finish book. Stopped at 49%.

i’ve been giving themes i’m not into a good go. step bro/sis/parent is not my thing. also this story so far give the same whit and until him by cora rose. decoy they didn’t have the added creep factor of step brothers.

After Hours Lectures by Kimberly Knight
Did not finish book. Stopped at 39%.

i knew he was professor but sometimes the blurb will say professor but it’s tutor or something so i took chance. he is absolutely his professor. idk if old or what but ew on the professors side. also i’m the same age as him so double ew.

The Darkest Flame by Christina Lee
Did not finish book. Stopped at 18%.

i find there need to stay from each other kinda weird esp since there is a gay couple in the gang.

The Sins of the Orc by Finley Fenn
Did not finish book. Stopped at 26%.

we kinda thrown in. i don’t get the magic system. i don’t get he politics. this book assumes i read the books that these prequel to.