I really liked Willow and I also think Hayes is a great partner for her. That being said, I think around the 70% mark I was very disappointed by the very dragged out ending. Without spoilers, I will say the plot just went from being a small town romance to eat pray, love energy.
For those of you that don’t mind spoilers I just feel like the trip to Japan while conceptually I understood the messaging around. It was unnecessary and felt very random. It completely skewed the pacing all for the café to not even matter within a couple chapters and we went from Willow being someone who is a spirited person, but in the town for the most part, not really mentioning wanting to leave as much to it being this whole conversation group oiler> about what they need to do as a couple to be happy and who needs to sacrifice their dreams or their goals and I don’t understand why it was such a Dramatic presentation. I feel like the message was true. I agree with the concept that a partner shouldn’t sacrifice for the other but rather come to a healthy compromise — but the Socratic seminar set up of the scene, just felt very preachy as opposed to part of the novel’s plot and honestly, I think everything just went down downhill after the trip to Japan. It just felt very, very specific to what the author wanted as opposed to what felt natural to the scenes and energy of the books, starting set up.
I want to give this book 5 stars and might change my mind, but this book was AMAZINGLY cute and self aware and relevant and relatable and just so good.
Why do I feel hesitant to give it 5 full stars? I might be nit picking but it’s specifically this when the FL gets into a fight with her sister at the climax, they all center on her sister blaming her for their moms death - rough and expected fine - BUT as they work to forgive, the FL never apologized for starting it by saying it would be her sisters fault if their dad dies. It was said but the FL doesn’t even internally feel bad about it as she gripes over her sister’s words and really just ONE sentence of acknowledgement would have done wonders for this esp bc the FL is so self aware for so much other stuff