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The Forgetting Moon by Brian Lee Durfee

playerprophet's review

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5.0

I'm crazy about this book and tell everyone who will listen about it, but as a friend said: "what it's about doesn't cover what's good about it."

I say, it's what the Game of Thrones TV show wanted A Song of Ice and Fire to be.

dashingyak6's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious sad tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

behnaz's review

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated

4.5

tracit's review

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3.0

Story: In a very religious world a kingdom is on the brink of invasion. According to a prophecy five people can stand in the way of the invaders.
3/5

Characters: This is very character driven work with multiple points of views. Strangely the main protagonist Nail was the least interesting and most annoying character for me. Characterization is done very well, but sometimes slows the books.
3/5

Worldbuilding: Do not get me wrong, there is a lot of worldbuilding done here. A lot of thought seems to be put into this world and its religion and background. But it is really just not my kind of world. Too many times I was reminded of Christian religion and I do like more fantasy if I read fantasy. If I remember correctly magic was absent from this book at all.
3/5

Writing Style: Nothing special to note, except for a debut novel it is executed very well.
3/5

(Sub) Genre rating: For me it is a mix of High / Epic Fantasy with Grimdark.
3/5

Final Thoughts / Buzz: I was really looking forward to this book and also it was part of The Five Warrior Angels, I hoped it was not to much influenced by Christian religion. But unfortunatley for me it did not work out. Overall it is a very well executed debut novel which is just not my cup of tea. And therefore I won't return to this world in the near future.

newbett's review

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4.0

Book #5 of 2023

AT LAST. I'm done with this book.

It feels like I have been reading it forever. I loved the story, the setting and the "grimdark" events. But the pacing was so ... slow, it made me drop the book and take a break from it, and even dnfing it. However, I'm glad I finished it, because I like it. And surprisingly.. I'm very excited to know what the next books bring.

theyungstump's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

jordancore's review

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5.0

Really good but lacking that memorable Tyrion-like character 8.8

lordnikon's review

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3.0

A solid, and entertaining debut overall! Great world building, characters, and setting.

It's about 300 pages too long. The pace Judders to a halt often (especially in the middle), and the book suffers from bloat. There is tonnes of extraneous info in this book. Durfee needs to cut the chaff and stick to the main thrust of the story. And he needs to sort out how to insert extra info organically. We shouldn't learn about Stefan's proficiency with a bow....while Nail and Ava are having a moment on the cliffs. That should come in at some point when that's the thrust of what's occurring in that section. It felt scatterbrained to have those two incongruous things in that section.

Also. This business of making each book be 55 chapters? Dude, just no. ESPECIALLY no if they are going to be how long they are here. Your book had about 450-500 pages worth of SOLID SOLID story...you need to cut the extra stuff so the pace doesn't suffer.

Also, put an ending in even a serial book...don't just drop everyone's narratives off in nowheresville...readers need closure before you ask them to come back.

I'm in for book 2. But I'm going to be FAR less forgiving if that one suffers from the same bloat as this one.

carnbostrikesagain's review against another edition

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It's good and all and maybe I'd be living for it at a different time but I'm just very bored reading it and want to move on.

rajigo's review

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Did not grab me.