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Spiral

Bal Khabra

3.82 AVERAGE

tyleewillis's review against another edition

5.0

hopeful inspiring lighthearted medium-paced

Loveable characters: Yes

Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Khabra can do no wrong in my eyes. another beautiful HEA with characters that feed something deep in my soul. I loved this story, and I love these characters oh so much. I’ll want to reread before Revolve, for sure! Finished this one in less than 12 hours. 10/10, 5 stars.

nicolejanienic19's review against another edition

1.0

funny lighthearted slow-paced

Plot or Character Driven: Character

Strong character development: Complicated

Loveable characters: No

Diverse cast of characters: Yes

Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

the first 60% was alright but then it dragged on forever. Sage was annoying to me. she actively chose to struggle when she could’ve gotten help from her uncle. she had a choice to have a better life. yes I understand it’s great to be independent but once Elias decided to help her, she readily accepted his help. she only had a brief moment of not wanting help. She was quick to give up on things when she did not get her way. with the whole swan dance thing, she immediately lost her confidence over one incident. I wanted her to grow up. yea she had that “redemption” moment but it fell flat. As for Elias, he was boring. there was nothing interesting about him as an individual. He did not have a personality outside of Sage. He was like every other service type bf. He just did everything for her and did not have problems outside of her except for his daddy issues. Even then I felt like the author did not explore the depth of his daddy issues. Idk I just did not find either character interesting. the storyline was boring as fuck. they weren’t even fake dating. He called her his girlfriend the entire time and they basically were a couple from the gecko. It was a bore!!!

courtneykaelin's review against another edition

3.0

Collide was one of my favorite hockey romances last year, so I was extremely excited to get my hands on spiral and get to know Eli more, however, this one kind of fell flat for me. It took me a while to get into the story, and I felt like it was pretty long