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piticu's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
clowdywings's review against another edition
5.0
4.5
First of all, lemme just say that the cover is so well done!! So gorgeous!
The story was pretty full of cliches. I found them enjoyable most likely because of the events that they created. This is about a girl (apprentice librarian) who is discovering who she really is and how she fits into the world. I think it was fairly well paced, maybe a little slow.
The characters were cool. They each had a lot of character development which I totally appreciated.
-Vhalla is your typical female YA fantasy character. At first I couldn't stand her, but as the story progressed, I learned that she's kinda awesome.
-Prince Aldrik is your typical bad boy/misunderstood soul. He's described by many characters in the book to have a 'silver tongue' which I could see sometimes.
-the rest, although cool, didn't really show up and play a HUGE part like these two did.
The writing was decent. It did its job. It isn't my favorite but it flowed (mostly) so it was good. There were spots where I honestly was so confused. Maybe four spots. They just didn't provide enough information for me to realize what was going on.
The cliffhanger at the end is brutal. Cannot wait until book 2!
First of all, lemme just say that the cover is so well done!! So gorgeous!
The story was pretty full of cliches. I found them enjoyable most likely because of the events that they created. This is about a girl (apprentice librarian) who is discovering who she really is and how she fits into the world. I think it was fairly well paced, maybe a little slow.
The characters were cool. They each had a lot of character development which I totally appreciated.
-Vhalla is your typical female YA fantasy character. At first I couldn't stand her, but as the story progressed, I learned that she's kinda awesome.
-Prince Aldrik is your typical bad boy/misunderstood soul. He's described by many characters in the book to have a 'silver tongue' which I could see sometimes.
-the rest, although cool, didn't really show up and play a HUGE part like these two did.
The writing was decent. It did its job. It isn't my favorite but it flowed (mostly) so it was good. There were spots where I honestly was so confused. Maybe four spots. They just didn't provide enough information for me to realize what was going on.
The cliffhanger at the end is brutal. Cannot wait until book 2!
softcalico's review against another edition
5.0
4.5 stars
That's the fast I've consumed a book in a while. Like I ate that shit UP!! Why had I dnf'd this before?? I must not have been in the right headspace cause this book was right up my alley. Enemies to lovers, royalty and commoner, fantasy, magic...
That's the fast I've consumed a book in a while. Like I ate that shit UP!! Why had I dnf'd this before?? I must not have been in the right headspace cause this book was right up my alley. Enemies to lovers, royalty and commoner, fantasy, magic...
judeandolin's review against another edition
1.0
I really tried. I mean I really really really tried to find something good about this.
But it's a day after and I'm still sitting here like
HOW DOES THIS HAVE A 4+ STAR RATING???
Listen. *deep breath* I am. IN LOVE. With Avatar. It's one of the biggest influences on my own writing. So whenever I hear of an elemental fantasy I PICK THAT BITCH UP AND READ IT. I read it because I already have a pretty heavy inkling that I'll love it, but ALSO because I'm writing an elemental fantasy and reading other books in the same vein is a bit like studying. How does the author pull this off? How do they explain this? You know, that kinda thing.
ANYWAYs.
This was a dumpster fire. And I hated it within one chapter. So why did I torture myself through the whole book? Because everyone on this godforsaken website gave this book shining stars and said it was fantastic!!!! Was I reading another book?? Idk man. Air Awakens was basically a bastard lovechild between Avatar/The Phantom of the Opera/Twilight. Yes, Twilight. And you know what? I LIKED Twilight.
(thoughasanadultIcanlookbackandseeitsflawsitstillretainsitsentertainmentvaluekbye.)
So for starters, the main character, Vhalla, is a Mary Sure to the extreme. She's got messy hair that omg never cooperates, she's seemingly plain but actually totally beautiful once she puts on a dress and makeup, and—perhaps the worst part—she has literally three guys fawning over her throughout this entire novel. Three. Separate. Men. You thought love triangles were bad, enter THE LOVE QUADRANGLE.
Vhalla (which my computer keeps trying to correct to "Veal") finds out the superhotprince (literally nicknamed 'The Heartbreaker Prince' by the citizens) has been injured in the war, so she does what us nerdy girls do best: she stays up all night reading, trying to find a cure for the poison in his system. Somehow this Awakens her powers, she's kidnapped for some reason to The Dark Spooky Tower of the Sorcerers, and she finds out the person she saved was actually the ALSOHOTDARKSPOOKYFIREPRINCE and that's how the story begins. She spends the entire first 25% of the book saying, "NO I CAN'T BE A SORCERER. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE," just over and over... for probably about 100 pages.
The next 50% of the book is spent falling in and out of the love quadrangle—she gets asked on a date by her friend Sareem—of course hot dark fire prince sees them and narrows his eyes broodingly; she dances with the Heartbreaker Prince (I'm glad I don't have to come up with a goofy nickname for him since the author managed that for me) and then sex scandal spreads because she was in his room? and last but not lease, of course, the dark hot fire prince tutors her through letters and finally in person and they fall in ~~instalove~~.
Aaaand the last 25% of the book was—gasp—actually decent! For a second, at least. The fight scene was great! Really! It was awesome and we finally got to see some of the "dark" side of the prince, some gritty action, as well as Vhalla's courage. Unfortunately that was short lived; she got thrown in prison afterward for a crime she didn't commit, and of course there's an evil senator guy (whose hatred of Vhalla is never really explained?) and this situation was dragged out for days for some reason.
See, I get it. When I started writing my elemental fantasy I thought, "Wouldn't it be, like, super cool if I had 4 books and each of them had one of the elements in the title?" Seriously, I considered this... And then I MURDERED MY DARLING. It was a bad idea, and it didn't need to be done to tell the story, and it just makes the concept more cutesy than anything. So I killed the idea and moved on. Unfortunately this author didn't, and so she had to stretch the first book out exponentially to make the title ("Air Awakens") work. It's ridiculous, it's kitschy, and it ruined a potentially awesome idea! I really wanted to love this story, but I simply couldn't because the first book was so incredibly tedious and unnecessary (kind of like this review—cough cough).
Anyway, god, I want to read the next book, because the action scene at the end was pretty great. And I want more of that. What I don't want to do is pay for a book that ends up being a stretched out account of a bunch of characters flirting. I mean, I can get straight romance if I walk into a mall. I don't need to pay for that. Idk. I might go for it, because elemental fantasy is my THING Y'ALL. But we'll see.
But it's a day after and I'm still sitting here like
HOW DOES THIS HAVE A 4+ STAR RATING???
Listen. *deep breath* I am. IN LOVE. With Avatar. It's one of the biggest influences on my own writing. So whenever I hear of an elemental fantasy I PICK THAT BITCH UP AND READ IT. I read it because I already have a pretty heavy inkling that I'll love it, but ALSO because I'm writing an elemental fantasy and reading other books in the same vein is a bit like studying. How does the author pull this off? How do they explain this? You know, that kinda thing.
ANYWAYs.
This was a dumpster fire. And I hated it within one chapter. So why did I torture myself through the whole book? Because everyone on this godforsaken website gave this book shining stars and said it was fantastic!!!! Was I reading another book?? Idk man. Air Awakens was basically a bastard lovechild between Avatar/The Phantom of the Opera/Twilight. Yes, Twilight. And you know what? I LIKED Twilight.
(thoughasanadultIcanlookbackandseeitsflawsitstillretainsitsentertainmentvaluekbye.)
So for starters, the main character, Vhalla, is a Mary Sure to the extreme. She's got messy hair that omg never cooperates, she's seemingly plain but actually totally beautiful once she puts on a dress and makeup, and—perhaps the worst part—she has literally three guys fawning over her throughout this entire novel. Three. Separate. Men. You thought love triangles were bad, enter THE LOVE QUADRANGLE.
Vhalla (which my computer keeps trying to correct to "Veal") finds out the superhotprince (literally nicknamed 'The Heartbreaker Prince' by the citizens) has been injured in the war, so she does what us nerdy girls do best: she stays up all night reading, trying to find a cure for the poison in his system. Somehow this Awakens her powers, she's kidnapped for some reason to The Dark Spooky Tower of the Sorcerers, and she finds out the person she saved was actually the ALSOHOTDARKSPOOKYFIREPRINCE and that's how the story begins. She spends the entire first 25% of the book saying, "NO I CAN'T BE A SORCERER. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE," just over and over... for probably about 100 pages.
The next 50% of the book is spent falling in and out of the love quadrangle—she gets asked on a date by her friend Sareem—of course hot dark fire prince sees them and narrows his eyes broodingly; she dances with the Heartbreaker Prince (I'm glad I don't have to come up with a goofy nickname for him since the author managed that for me) and then sex scandal spreads because she was in his room? and last but not lease, of course, the dark hot fire prince tutors her through letters and finally in person and they fall in ~~instalove~~.
Aaaand the last 25% of the book was—gasp—actually decent! For a second, at least. The fight scene was great! Really! It was awesome and we finally got to see some of the "dark" side of the prince, some gritty action, as well as Vhalla's courage. Unfortunately that was short lived; she got thrown in prison afterward for a crime she didn't commit, and of course there's an evil senator guy (whose hatred of Vhalla is never really explained?) and this situation was dragged out for days for some reason.
See, I get it. When I started writing my elemental fantasy I thought, "Wouldn't it be, like, super cool if I had 4 books and each of them had one of the elements in the title?" Seriously, I considered this... And then I MURDERED MY DARLING. It was a bad idea, and it didn't need to be done to tell the story, and it just makes the concept more cutesy than anything. So I killed the idea and moved on. Unfortunately this author didn't, and so she had to stretch the first book out exponentially to make the title ("Air Awakens") work. It's ridiculous, it's kitschy, and it ruined a potentially awesome idea! I really wanted to love this story, but I simply couldn't because the first book was so incredibly tedious and unnecessary (kind of like this review—cough cough).
Anyway, god, I want to read the next book, because the action scene at the end was pretty great. And I want more of that. What I don't want to do is pay for a book that ends up being a stretched out account of a bunch of characters flirting. I mean, I can get straight romance if I walk into a mall. I don't need to pay for that. Idk. I might go for it, because elemental fantasy is my THING Y'ALL. But we'll see.
colleen_corleone's review against another edition
1.5
Vhalla almost dies several times. I was thrilled, but she was alive and the book was still going.
sarsarsarsarsar's review against another edition
5.0
TECHNICALLY this should probably be four stars based on lack of world building and measly attempts at showing not telling
BUT I DONT CARE. I LOVE IT.
Read this in two days but felt like two minutes.
Kova is the queen of chapter cliff hangers!!
There were several times i noticed where the story could have gone predictable/convenient but then it didn’t and I was so relieved.
I live for the drama. And boy did this deliver
Not sure if I read this super fast or if there could have been more to help set up the story better but I did find it slightly rushed (which was OK enough bc I was eager to keep seeing what would happen) but did leave for some unanswered questions / assuming on the reader
BUT I DONT CARE. I LOVE IT.
Read this in two days but felt like two minutes.
Kova is the queen of chapter cliff hangers!!
There were several times i noticed where the story could have gone predictable/convenient but then it didn’t and I was so relieved.
I live for the drama. And boy did this deliver
Not sure if I read this super fast or if there could have been more to help set up the story better but I did find it slightly rushed (which was OK enough bc I was eager to keep seeing what would happen) but did leave for some unanswered questions / assuming on the reader
kistireads's review against another edition
3.0
✨3.5 stars ✨
This was compelling even though I didn’t love certain elements, however I will definitely be continuing on! I love a good dark prince character
This was compelling even though I didn’t love certain elements, however I will definitely be continuing on! I love a good dark prince character
oonagh_'s review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
bffbookclubkate's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Elemental magic (à la Avatar: The Last Airbender) with a cool library setting and a broody, morally grey love interest? You just get me!
While I really enjoyed the premise of this book, the execution felt pretty clumsy to me. This book is this author’s debut novel and I think that comes across in the writing. That said, it wasn’t enough to turn me off completely and I’d pick up book 2 to see if I like it even more!
While I really enjoyed the premise of this book, the execution felt pretty clumsy to me. This book is this author’s debut novel and I think that comes across in the writing. That said, it wasn’t enough to turn me off completely and I’d pick up book 2 to see if I like it even more!