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jesslknutson's review
4.25
Home run Proposal
4.25 โญ๏ธ
3 ๐ถ๏ธ
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All Hallie wanted was for her best friend to take her virginity after a home run. She made the proposal and set it out, but might of gave it to the wrong guy. That guy being Lane Collins her best friendโs brother.
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Those cartoon covers always get you. I went into this book thinking a fun baseball read with a romance vibe. This was a lot spicer than I thought, but I didnโt mind it too much. I enjoyed having Hallie open up about her own personal struggles and being able to connect to her. I loved how the communication with everyone in the story was so good. Lane was written so well, down to earth for Hallie. Always making sure she was comfortable with everything and knowing he was always by her side. I enjoyed getting just the right amount of spice and sports in the book. So excited to keep reading more of Maren!
cameryn14's review
dnf at 49%. i couldnt get past the virgin thing, the spicy scenes felt so awkward and weird
crottink's review against another edition
4.0
This was such a cute and fun sports romance! I absolutely adored the audio of it because it was done so well, and kept my attention all through out.
Lane is a charismatic sweetheart. I adored how sweet he was on Hallie, and how he loved her exactly for who she is. I loved how Hallie embraces herself and everything she loves. She was so fun and quirky. These two overall were just so stinking adorable.
Read if you like
โพ๏ธ Baseball
โพ๏ธ Best Friend's Brother
โพ๏ธ Spice Lessons
โพ๏ธ Secret Pining
Lane is a charismatic sweetheart. I adored how sweet he was on Hallie, and how he loved her exactly for who she is. I loved how Hallie embraces herself and everything she loves. She was so fun and quirky. These two overall were just so stinking adorable.
Read if you like
โพ๏ธ Baseball
โพ๏ธ Best Friend's Brother
โพ๏ธ Spice Lessons
โพ๏ธ Secret Pining
withadreamy_farofflook's review
emotional
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.75
mitsooki's review against another edition
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
jaymeelhurst13's review
funny
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.75
This book was so stupid cute! I loved the whole best friendโs brother trope and the fact that they just had unrequited love until the plot kicked in! I kinda bleh at the idea of an arranged proposal to loose your virginity, but it helped Hallie grow a lot so I wonโt complain I guess lol. I LOVED Hallieโs obsession with Bigfoot and Aliens, and Laneโs support!
kirsten_shergold's review
lighthearted
relaxing
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
"๐ด๐๐๐'๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ป๐๐ธ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐
๐๐๐ป๐๐ธ๐, ๐ป๐ถ๐๐๐พ๐. ๐ฎ๐ ๐๐๐น๐น๐ถ๐๐ ๐ท๐๐ถ๐๐๐พ๐ป๐๐"
Ladies, if you are ever with a guy who does not treat you like Lane treats hallie he dose not deserve you!!!
"๐ต๐๐ธ๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐ป๐ถ๐๐๐พ๐... ๐๐๐'๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐พ ๐ป๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐น"
Overall this book was genuinely really good up to about 60% when it became nothing more than erotica.
The third act brakup felt super out of pocket and even worse was the fact she never actually tells lane what she saw, I doubt he would cheat on her but i feel like she should have mentioned it tho.
"๐ด๐๐ ๐๐๐ถ๐น๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ถ๐น๐๐พ๐ ๐๐๐'๐๐ ๐พ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐๐๐? ... ๐๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐น๐๐ป๐พ๐๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐"
2 well writen characters going throught there own shit, For lane it is not knowing what he wants to do in his feuture for Hallie it is being waitlisted for her dream school.
This book is definatly more charecter than plot based and was an easy read, I found when I had time to sit and read I didn't get destracted with this book and could easily read 100+ pages per sitting, but becuase of exams I didn't have as much time as i would have liked to read which is why this took me a few days to get through.
๐ด๐๐ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐น ๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐ป ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ป๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐พ๐๐. ๐ฏ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐พ๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ถ ๐ฏ๐ถ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐ ๐๐๐๐โฆโ โ๐ด๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ถ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐?โ โ๐ต๐๐.โ ๐ป๐ ๐ท๐๐ถ๐๐ธ๐ฝ๐๐. โ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐น๐พ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ธ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐๐ถ๐. ๐ผ ๐ถ๐ ๐ถ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐๐พ๐ ๐ป๐๐ ๐๐พ๐ป๐.โ
Ladies, if you are ever with a guy who does not treat you like Lane treats hallie he dose not deserve you!!!
"๐ต๐๐ธ๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐ป๐ถ๐๐๐พ๐... ๐๐๐'๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐พ ๐ป๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐๐๐๐น"
Overall this book was genuinely really good up to about 60% when it became nothing more than erotica.
The third act brakup felt super out of pocket and even worse was the fact she never actually tells lane what she saw, I doubt he would cheat on her but i feel like she should have mentioned it tho.
"๐ด๐๐ ๐๐๐ถ๐น๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ถ๐น๐๐พ๐ ๐๐๐'๐๐ ๐พ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ ๐ฝ๐๐ ๐๐๐? ... ๐๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐น๐๐ป๐พ๐๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐ถ๐๐"
2 well writen characters going throught there own shit, For lane it is not knowing what he wants to do in his feuture for Hallie it is being waitlisted for her dream school.
This book is definatly more charecter than plot based and was an easy read, I found when I had time to sit and read I didn't get destracted with this book and could easily read 100+ pages per sitting, but becuase of exams I didn't have as much time as i would have liked to read which is why this took me a few days to get through.
๐ด๐๐ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐น ๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐ป ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ป๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐พ๐๐. ๐ฏ๐ฝ๐พ๐ ๐พ๐ ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ถ ๐ฏ๐ถ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐ ๐๐๐๐โฆโ โ๐ด๐๐ ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ถ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐?โ โ๐ต๐๐.โ ๐ป๐ ๐ท๐๐ถ๐๐ธ๐ฝ๐๐. โ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐น๐พ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ธ๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ฝ๐ถ๐ ๐๐ถ๐. ๐ผ ๐ถ๐ ๐ถ ๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐๐พ๐ ๐ป๐๐ ๐๐พ๐ป๐.โ
kimberlyyyreads's review
funny
lighthearted
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
A very cute and quick read!
I thought the MC's made such a cute couple, I loved how supportive they were towards each other. Especially how understanding and loving Lane was to Hallie.
I am always a sucker for a MMC who is head over heels for the FMC and that is exactly how Lane was for Hallie.
I did get a little "not like the other girls" & "I'm so quirky" vibes from the FMC which is why I couldn't rate this book any higher LOL
I thought the climax and resolution were pretty predictable, but it was still super cute to read!
NGL, it took me a moment to wrap around my head that Hallie is younger than me (for context: she's 18, I'm 20). SO I FELT OLD LMAOOOOO.
Def recommend reading, if you're looking for a quick, spicy, soft, sports romance!
I thought the MC's made such a cute couple, I loved how supportive they were towards each other. Especially how understanding and loving Lane was to Hallie.
I am always a sucker for a MMC who is head over heels for the FMC and that is exactly how Lane was for Hallie.
I did get a little "not like the other girls" & "I'm so quirky" vibes from the FMC which is why I couldn't rate this book any higher LOL
I thought the climax and resolution were pretty predictable, but it was still super cute to read!
NGL, it took me a moment to wrap around my head that Hallie is younger than me (for context: she's 18, I'm 20). SO I FELT OLD LMAOOOOO.
Def recommend reading, if you're looking for a quick, spicy, soft, sports romance!
ellenmae's review against another edition
4.0
"You make everything so easy. Breathing, being the man I want to be. You make me want to be better, Hallie."
ok i am now in love with lane collins!!!! i love me a blonde mmc mhmhm this further backs my point! lane collins can do no wrong in my eyes and i will defend him till the day i die. same as my little purple loving alien loving girlie miss HALLIE ugh i loved her
ok i am now in love with lane collins!!!! i love me a blonde mmc mhmhm this further backs my point! lane collins can do no wrong in my eyes and i will defend him till the day i die. same as my little purple loving alien loving girlie miss HALLIE ugh i loved her