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Wings of Ebony by J. Elle

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dragonwriter's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional informative sad tense
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.5

When Rue’s mother died, her absentee father, Asim, swept in and whisked her away to Ghizon, an isolated island with magic inhabitants. Despite the legends that the Chancellor fought the gods for the magic and shared it with the people, Rue is more than a little suspicious of the lack of history before the Chancellor came. Rue defies the Ghizon rules of isolation to teleport back to America on the first anniversary of her mother’s death to give her half sister a special present, and has to use magic to save her, revealing her rebellion to the Ghizon authorities. In order to preserve her magic, Rue goes on the run, and learns the history that the Chancellor didn’t want anyone to know. Faced with extermination effort in both Ghizon and her home streets, Rue has to accept both sides of her heritage in order to save the people who need her.

This story was very upfront and blunt about its anti-racist themes. I wasn’t in the best mindset for confronting my white privilege, so it took me a while to struggle through it, but I’m glad I finished. Rue was a bit brash and impatient, but I enjoyed her attitude overall. The entire story is told in her POV, and her voice is very captivating. She loves her home and her people, and she’s very protective of them. I love how her ‘family’ comes together at the end to fight, and I enjoyed the justice they found together. I did think that the split timeline was a little confusing; it wasn’t always clear when Rue was in the present, or remembering the past. The first few chapters she had a backflash, I was very confused on how she’d changed location. I think I would have enjoyed this book more if I read it at a different point in time. I may try to read it again, just to see how it feels when my mental health is better.

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corncake's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful inspiring mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced

4.0


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shannnne_reads_words's review against another edition

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adventurous tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes

3.0


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ashlislibrary's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging emotional inspiring mysterious sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0


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calamitywindpetal's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional hopeful slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25


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greenlivingaudioworm's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny mysterious sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

2.5


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thewildmageslibrary's review against another edition

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4.0

I finally read this! And, I gotta say:
I KNEW SOMETHING WAS UP WITH GHIZON!

Rue would do anything for her family and that's one of her best qualities. <3 I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel!

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readwithanne's review against another edition

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adventurous dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.0


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book_voyager's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? N/A
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.75

This book rushed through its plot. It was so fast-paced, that when I started to listen to it, I thought my player jumped ahead. It maybe could’ve used a bit of background work in the beginning.

The story itself is quite traditional YA urban fantasy, a teenager finding out they have powers and all what comes with it, a power hungry antagonist and people to save. The usual. 
I did like the take-on of modern social issues. That peeped my interest.

I guess this book works better for younger readers, and those seeking their own voice in a book.

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andromeda_1998's review against another edition

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adventurous dark tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

3.5

Wings of ebony is one of those books that you want to love but even though you still liked it you feel like something is missing. It least it’s one of those books for me. Before I go into the book any further I want to put in a disclaimer: “I’m European, I have lived my whole life in a country that might not be perfect but where we can still 95% of the time trust the government to look out for us. I’m not going into the representation of this book since I do not have the knowledge to talk about his subject.” 
Okay, with that been said what are my thoughts about this book? 

The plot
Wings of ebony is about Rue. After her mom was killed she found herself in a strange magical country (Ghizon) where she had to learn to embrace her magic and deal with a father she has never known. We meet Rue a year after her mothers death. She found her way back to America to give her sister a birthday present but she ends up having to save her sisters life. When her sister touches her, rue breaks one of many rules of Ghizon. This starts a manhunt for Rue and she has to travel dangerous waters to keep herself and her sister safe. 

The books storyline focuses heavily  one Racism and police brutality. The storyline is actually pretty amazing and I really wanted to love it but the book has some flaws. The plot never really goes into a lot of different plotpoints. It is a lot of telling instead of showing. Rue is constantly telling that the block she comes from us fam, but we never actually get to explore her connections to the home she used to live in. We meet just 3 characters she knows and one she vaguely knows since he is the popular boy in school. I would have loved to see more of the connections between the main character and her home to make the reader understand the bond she feels with her community. I understand this is heavily inspired from real life but in the book itself it has no real foundation. There are more instances this happens but those are heavy spoilers so if your interested you can find them further below. 

Worldbuilding 
The worldbuilding is sloppy, we don’t actually get any worldbuilding about Ghizon. We just have to believe it exist but we don’t really get an explanation about who the world works. We also don’t really get to explore the magic. Magic was something the characters more really talked about than used and we never really got to see Rue grow into her powers or an explanation to the boundaries of the magic used in the book. We don’t even get an full explanation about how the magic works. Her is a piece of onyx, good luck! The history we do get doesn’t even cover the basics of the magic system. 

Writing style 
The writing is terrific! It’s fast paced and action pact. I’m not sure about the placing of the flash backs but some of the more emotional scenes have been done very well. I

Characters 
Rue is a fun character she is a bit typical ya, she misses some major red flags but hé, she is young enough to learn. She is a really strong female character and I would have loved to she her grow. 

Recommend, it’s a good book. I just miss a lot of explanation that could have made the book even better. I am a bit frustrated about that…. 
 
 
Other plot points that could have used more explanation: 
1. The whole gang plot on the block… what does the chancellor and the governor win from selling drugs And power in a country they do not care for and don’t need to have controle over for there plans to actually work. They only endanger their ambitions with there connection with America. If it was only to hurt Rue than the did that in the most round about stupid way imaginable. 

2. The father plot, we didn’t see them grow. She just hated his ass till he got killed. There is no relationship there and that’s her fault. 

3. The romance plot, it basically was a case of: “o look, a dark skinned boy with dimples and magic, I’m willing to sell my soul for him now” we read one scene between them before the boy was willing to risk his life for his “queen”. This was a big case of telling and no showing. It’s a shame. Give us some bounding before making them randomly kiss.  <spoilers> 

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