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adf6's review
3.0
Quick read
Fun quick read. No sons of anarchy but good enough to pass the time. Characters are well developed enough to drag you through the series
Fun quick read. No sons of anarchy but good enough to pass the time. Characters are well developed enough to drag you through the series
fictioncourt's review
1.0
Uh, where to start... D-R-A-M-A
That sums it up nicely.
Drama, unnecessary drama and a little bit of drama to top it off.
Madison was just another whiny main character that acted like a freaking child and deserved a good slap! She kept whining about the club even though she should have learned by now.
Sex, drama, sex, drama.
Okay I get it, within a 300 pages of a book - average - there's no way to fully write about an MC club and create a good background story to support any drama that is needed for the flow of the story but this one had none! None at all. Just a psycho ex boyfriend that started shooting people because Madison ran away. WHAT.THE.FUCK.
JUST NO.
The rest - male main character and 'club' are pretty much nonexistent apart from the 80% of the sex between the main characters which was blaaahhhh.
7sofia7's review
The story hits the usual mc romances bits but everything happens too quickly and there isn't much if any depth. The writing is juvenile.
vee79's review
5.0
It was a good book fro a Biker book, there were a few things that I found wrong but I would deff read the other book in this series.
nixiefawn's review
1.0
I was going to give this book 2 stars, but you know what? The ending with her father and mother just bothered me extremely. It gets 1 star from me.
Really jumpy ending and book in whole. You got a lot of really cliffhanging and important information, but there's never an explanation or discussion about it. Like in the beginning of the book there was a mention of her thinking J cheated on her, and she then cheated with someone else. But she then mentions that J didn't cheat on her at all. So... Her cheating isn't mentioned at all after that. We're just going to drop it? ...Okey...
And her friend is never really a part of the story anymore, or the kid, Crystal, either. I was sure her male friend would somehow get involved with J again and jealousy to wreak havoc. But noooo....
Also their relationship is just going up and down. She gets angry because he doesn't talk to her, they are by themselves for a while, and then they have sex and everything is fins again. Then it starts over once again. She (is it bad that I don't even remember her name) is also very weird and her character. She is annoyed that she doesn't get to know anything about the club, and then her mother tells her that it is okey, and that she should trust them. Annnd... she did a 180 and suddenly just let's it go. No more caring, just a "be careful, honey!". I thought she would be a badass and stubborn, not just to give up after her mother tells her to.
So, in the end I basically just skimmed trough the last chapter just to get it over with. By then I had already read that far that it was just the same to read it to the end.
1 star out of 5.
Really jumpy ending and book in whole. You got a lot of really cliffhanging and important information, but there's never an explanation or discussion about it. Like in the beginning of the book there was a mention of her thinking J cheated on her, and she then cheated with someone else. But she then mentions that J didn't cheat on her at all. So... Her cheating isn't mentioned at all after that. We're just going to drop it? ...Okey...
And her friend is never really a part of the story anymore, or the kid, Crystal, either. I was sure her male friend would somehow get involved with J again and jealousy to wreak havoc. But noooo....
Also their relationship is just going up and down. She gets angry because he doesn't talk to her, they are by themselves for a while, and then they have sex and everything is fins again. Then it starts over once again. She (is it bad that I don't even remember her name) is also very weird and her character. She is annoyed that she doesn't get to know anything about the club, and then her mother tells her that it is okey, and that she should trust them. Annnd... she did a 180 and suddenly just let's it go. No more caring, just a "be careful, honey!". I thought she would be a badass and stubborn, not just to give up after her mother tells her to.
So, in the end I basically just skimmed trough the last chapter just to get it over with. By then I had already read that far that it was just the same to read it to the end.
1 star out of 5.
crystal_lake80's review
dark
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
faithangel356's review
emotional
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
mrsbatts610's review
2.0
I really couldn't get into this book. Couldn't connect with the characters at all. A big part of my problem, and this made me realize I have this issue with other books as well, is that the author seems to be confusing "argumentative" with "strong". Just because Madison yelled back at Jason, all the time, called him names, started fights, didn't mean she was strong. And the author TOLD us repeatedly in the book how strong she was supposed to be. In fact, all that yelling and fighting kind if proves how weak she really is. Instead of calming down, which takes strength, she got mad. She seemed like an immature little spoiled girl, not a 29 year old woman.
And the other thing that annoyed me were the gratuitous sex scenes. I loved hot, steamy sex scenes as much as the next smut lover, but there was no build up to any of the sex scenes. They didn't push the story along. It was as if the author said, "ok, they're going to bed, here's a scene." " ok, they're alone, here's a sex scene".
Oh well.
And the other thing that annoyed me were the gratuitous sex scenes. I loved hot, steamy sex scenes as much as the next smut lover, but there was no build up to any of the sex scenes. They didn't push the story along. It was as if the author said, "ok, they're going to bed, here's a scene." " ok, they're alone, here's a sex scene".
Oh well.