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3.81 AVERAGE
3.81 AVERAGE
To be fair, I should preface this review with the fact that I read this after reading [b:One Night with You|24484520|One Night with You (Fatal, #0.5)|Marie Force|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1424068515s/24484520.jpg|44078858], which I do realize was written way after this book. That being said, I was quite shocked that this book is set SIX YEARS after that event!
Nick came across as a somewhat whiny and pushy man, who felt threatened by Sam's independence and actions to protect him. He was almost too alpha for a relationship with Sam. Sam came across as somewhat cold, and while her capitulation was inevitable after the events of [b:One Night with You|24484520|One Night with You (Fatal, #0.5)|Marie Force|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1424068515s/24484520.jpg|44078858], it came almost too quickly and was somewhat unrealistic in terms of consequences of their actions. I'd heard these two be compared to Eve and Roarke from the In Death series, but I honestly don't see that between Sam and Nick. Nick and Sam butted heads more than they helped each other solve the case, so I really didn't see how instrumental Nick was in solving the Senator's murder. It wasn't even a Castle and Beckett rivalry from the TV show Castle, because eventually their bickering lead to a decent theory that lead to the killer. It felt like there was very little give and take between Sam and Nick, which didn't sit well with me.
I didn't like that much of those missing six years were just glossed over with little detail, because I felt invested and involved in these characters and to just be handed the Cliffs Notes version of their lives for 6 years felt like a betrayal.
The book was difficult for me to put down, and the actual killer was a total shock, so that raised the rating from a 3 to a 4 star rating for me. I'm curious to see if things smooth out a bit for the couple, so I'll continue the series for certain!
Nick came across as a somewhat whiny and pushy man, who felt threatened by Sam's independence and actions to protect him. He was almost too alpha for a relationship with Sam. Sam came across as somewhat cold, and while her capitulation was inevitable after the events of [b:One Night with You|24484520|One Night with You (Fatal, #0.5)|Marie Force|https://d.gr-assets.com/books/1424068515s/24484520.jpg|44078858], it came almost too quickly and was somewhat unrealistic in terms of consequences of their actions. I'd heard these two be compared to Eve and Roarke from the In Death series, but I honestly don't see that between Sam and Nick. Nick and Sam butted heads more than they helped each other solve the case, so I really didn't see how instrumental Nick was in solving the Senator's murder. It wasn't even a Castle and Beckett rivalry from the TV show Castle, because eventually their bickering lead to a decent theory that lead to the killer. It felt like there was very little give and take between Sam and Nick, which didn't sit well with me.
I didn't like that much of those missing six years were just glossed over with little detail, because I felt invested and involved in these characters and to just be handed the Cliffs Notes version of their lives for 6 years felt like a betrayal.
The book was difficult for me to put down, and the actual killer was a total shock, so that raised the rating from a 3 to a 4 star rating for me. I'm curious to see if things smooth out a bit for the couple, so I'll continue the series for certain!
Having read and liked Marie's Love at First Flight, I was happy to peruse a copy of her newest offering, Fatal Affair. The story is pretty simple: a Senator is murdered, and his Chief of Staff (Nick) has to work with the detective (Sam) responsible for finding the perpetrator. Never mind that Nick and Sam had a one-night stand six years ago. Never mind that Sam has other things on her mind from her last case. Never mind that the Senator has a secret life that his family would prefer to keep under wraps.
The character interaction is deftly written, and I liked both Nick and Sam. The suspense angle keeps the story moving, and the other stuff that pops in keeps the story believable. Because even though this is a romance novel, doesn't mean everything has to be about the boy and the girl. The only thing I didn't care for is the cover. I'm not sure why exactly, but it didn't scream "pick me up!". It didn't even seem to mutter it under its breath. But don't let that stop you from picking this one up if you're looking for a summer romance/thriller.
The character interaction is deftly written, and I liked both Nick and Sam. The suspense angle keeps the story moving, and the other stuff that pops in keeps the story believable. Because even though this is a romance novel, doesn't mean everything has to be about the boy and the girl. The only thing I didn't care for is the cover. I'm not sure why exactly, but it didn't scream "pick me up!". It didn't even seem to mutter it under its breath. But don't let that stop you from picking this one up if you're looking for a summer romance/thriller.
This one sounded so promising. Many, many great reviews.
The writing was so bumpy I couldn't get into the story. The book opens with the dead senator in his bed and the details of his murder were rather over-the-top. It was more gimmick than engaging story and that continued as far in as I got into the story.
The dialogue was rough, wooden, and odd at times. Enough so that instead of thinking about the story, I was thinking about the writing.
The characters' reactions (especially those to being asked for alibis) didn't feel realistic. Too much outage and tears and too little realism.
And how about that instalove that came from a one night stand 6 years before?
I scanned ahead to see how the story ended and felt no remorse at not hanging in.
The writing was so bumpy I couldn't get into the story. The book opens with the dead senator in his bed and the details of his murder were rather over-the-top. It was more gimmick than engaging story and that continued as far in as I got into the story.
The dialogue was rough, wooden, and odd at times. Enough so that instead of thinking about the story, I was thinking about the writing.
The characters' reactions (especially those to being asked for alibis) didn't feel realistic. Too much outage and tears and too little realism.
And how about that instalove that came from a one night stand 6 years before?
I scanned ahead to see how the story ended and felt no remorse at not hanging in.
I couldn't put this book down! I loved all of the characters, the plot, and the romance between Sam and Nick. Marie Force never disappoints, but she outdid herself with this story. I loved everything about this story. If you're looking for a good mystery/thriller/crime story with some humor and romance then this is the book for you!
This was a good way to introduce the two main characters of the Fatal series. Detective Sergeant Sam Holland is called in when a senator is found murdered in his home. His chief of staff, Nick Cappuano found him and it just so happens that both of them had a memorable night a few years ago. The mystery of who killed the Senator was a central theme with the secondary characters and the two MCs stories interweaving through it all.
I liked Sam for the most part. She was competent, confident and good at what she did. I found her to be a very harsh self-critic. She was harder on herself than anyone else but I guess that's because she expects so much from herself. And then there is Nick...gosh. So sweet and understanding. He was supportive, strong and loving. He was going through so much but was a pillar of strength and comfort.
When I picked up this book I didn't realise it already has eleven books in the series. I look forward to looking into Sam and Nick's lives when the mood strikes.
I liked Sam for the most part. She was competent, confident and good at what she did. I found her to be a very harsh self-critic. She was harder on herself than anyone else but I guess that's because she expects so much from herself. And then there is Nick...gosh. So sweet and understanding. He was supportive, strong and loving. He was going through so much but was a pillar of strength and comfort.
When I picked up this book I didn't realise it already has eleven books in the series. I look forward to looking into Sam and Nick's lives when the mood strikes.
This is a great start to the series!
Detective Sam Holland is called to investigate the murder of a U. S. senator and runs right into a long ago one night stand. Nick Cappuano is the late Senator's chief of staff and is one of the suspects. He and Sam apparently left a lot of things unfinished.
There's lots of action, suspense and mystery, ending with some unforeseen twists and shockers. Sam and Nick's romance smoldered throughout the investigation and I'm looking forward to what's next for them and more action.
Detective Sam Holland is called to investigate the murder of a U. S. senator and runs right into a long ago one night stand. Nick Cappuano is the late Senator's chief of staff and is one of the suspects. He and Sam apparently left a lot of things unfinished.
There's lots of action, suspense and mystery, ending with some unforeseen twists and shockers. Sam and Nick's romance smoldered throughout the investigation and I'm looking forward to what's next for them and more action.
Really enjoyed this story! I loved the interactions between Nick and Sam and the twists and the turns of the plot ensured I had a hard time putting it down. Can't wait to read the next one in the series! :)
I'd give this a 5 star rating if I didn't keep getting the creepy feeling that this author is writing an excellent InDeath fanfic. The characters and storyline are well developed and different enough from the ID series that it's a truly enjoyable read. The main character Sam is Eve like but much more flawed and less self assured. Her wise cracking sidekick/Peabody clone is male (Freddie) and entertaining. Hot scenes are very hot. My only beef would be the occasional uncomfortable phrases like "toss him in a cage" and use of a clutch piece that make me think this author is a huge JD Robb fan.