3.56 AVERAGE

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3.0
hopeful lighthearted slow-paced
relaxing medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No

Little predictable but easy and light
funny lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
funny hopeful inspiring lighthearted slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
funny lighthearted relaxing fast-paced
hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
fast-paced

I almost gave it a 2 -- haha. At first I thought the writing was kind of bad, but I don't think that's necessarily true. The writing is fine, it's the plot I couldn't jump on board with. It was light and had sweet moments sprinkled in...and, still, I was bored. It didn't help that I wasn't intersted in the romance (in fact, it seemed that it was introduced a little too late). I enjoyed the Christmassy descriptions of Edinburgh, though! Idk, maybe it's a 2.75.

Edit: I thought about it a little longer, and it's actually more of a 2 for me. I just didn't like the characters all that much. And the more I think about the story, the more I'm annoyed by it. Well!

3.5. Cute read. I really wish the author developed Carmen a bit more outside of the relationship with her nieces/nephew. There was definitely more room for her to have a proper resolution with Sofia, and to realize that her comparing herself to her older sister (and essentially changing the whole course of her life because of it) was needless.
Spoiler Additionally, since Oke was her romantic interest at the end, I feel like Cogan didn't give enough time for that to develop given how much time was spent on Carmen and Blair. Also, didn't understand the subplot given to Mr. McCredie and his true heritage. Don't think it added anything to the story.