186 reviews for:

When it Raynes

Montana Fyre

3.64 AVERAGE

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caitiebmoore's review

5.0
adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Loved it! 
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

casslb's review

3.0
dark tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

love it!

Want a good bad boy in the mafia, good girl just trying to make ends meet? Then this is the one for you! You can’t help but fall in love with Emerson and Rayne

melbitz's review

3.75
dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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ashlovestoread's review

4.0
dark tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes

I enjoyed this book a lot! I loved how Rayne cared for and wanted to help the kids at the youth center, Rayne's family was so welcoming to Emerson, Rayne was so protective of Emerson but still let her maintain some of her independence, and the chemistry between Rayne and Emerson was definitely there! I felt the sexual tension between them right away. And the suspense was good! However, I did feel like the story was at a stand still sometimes. It felt like a lot was happening and nothing was happening at the same time. Due to pacing issues possibly??? But, not entirely sure. I was overall pretty pleased with this book though and will probably read the 2nd book in the series at some point! 🙂

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dementiakay's review

4.0
dark emotional tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

lgrox86's review

4.25
dark medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Rayne is officially in my top 5 book husbands! I couldn't get enough of him! This book had lots of my favorite tropes including OTT and J/P mmc, touch her and die, and who did this to you. My only complaint would be some weird typos and that I wish there plot point of Emerson having anemia went somewhere. She mentions it specifically because she bruises easily but then makes it a point to say it leads to really bad periods. I thought for sure we'd get a great scene of him taking care of her but sadly we dont. 

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gholmes24's review

2.5
challenging dark emotional tense fast-paced
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whimsymusings's review

4.5
dark emotional tense fast-paced