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gabookaholics's review
4.0
This was a fun addition to the series. It’s a novella so you can and should expect it to be shorter than you’re used to typically. I think because of this I felt like some parts we didn’t get enough detail in, like I especially wanted more time after the book ended if that makes sense. I wasn’t ready for it to be over when it was over. I do know there’s another book in the series coming soon though so I am hopeful I’ll get to see more Pilar and Ben there. Overall, I liked Pilar’s story. I did feel like she was just really young and not necessarily immature but just naive maybe? I think because of that, there was a part of me that couldn’t really connect as well with her as I did with Adeline for some reason. Plus, when you have a guy like Ben who clearly is smitten and you end things for the reason she did? I get it’s a huge commitment but if you really love someone you’ll figure out a way. Which she did in the long run I know, but I just kind of felt like that was some unnecessary angst they put themselves through. However, I still enjoyed the giddy feelings you get through reading the story and Ben and Pilar falling for each other. I loved Amir’s character. I loved getting to hear more about Addie and Eli. And this book definitely got me more excited for Aramis’ book... I can’t wait to read that one!!!
illusionrecluse's review
emotional
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
2.0
linzreadz13's review
4.0
This was such a sweet and steamy novella. It didn't feel short like a lot of novellas do and I felt as if I got a complete story.
Pilar has never had a chance to really live. As a princess, she has always done what she's told, and behaves herself. She stays under the radar, and out of the press, until she finally goes out with her long time crush and famous footballer, Benjamin Drake.
I love Ben and Pilar so much. Watching them navigate their feelings was a pure joy and their chemistry is completely undeniable. They were able to overcome fears, insecurities, and were finally able to find their happily ever after.
I can't wait to get my hands on Aramis's story! It's sure to be a ride and I'm so excited to get on.
Grateful to have received a complimentary ARC copy to honestly review.
Pilar has never had a chance to really live. As a princess, she has always done what she's told, and behaves herself. She stays under the radar, and out of the press, until she finally goes out with her long time crush and famous footballer, Benjamin Drake.
I love Ben and Pilar so much. Watching them navigate their feelings was a pure joy and their chemistry is completely undeniable. They were able to overcome fears, insecurities, and were finally able to find their happily ever after.
I can't wait to get my hands on Aramis's story! It's sure to be a ride and I'm so excited to get on.
Grateful to have received a complimentary ARC copy to honestly review.
cat_theodore's review
3.0
AT LAST, some sense of winning in this series. Don't get me wrong:
– I still had issues with the writing;
– The plot moved too fast
– The struggle to wrap my head around the concept of traveling in this world is still pretty much real
– I lowkey hated that the book started... you know... THE MORNING AFTER, considering Elias' book did NOTHING to introduce the new couple. I needed the author to set a scene on Pilar and Ben's dynamic. Were they friends? Kinda strangers who frequent the same events and kinda wanna bone? And about that night, did they plan to meetup, or did he find her drunk at an event and decide to take her home? GIVE ME A REASON FOR THEM TO END THE NIGHT TOGETHER!!!
– Is there too much to ask for more development in the feelings department? In book 1, Pilar admitted finding Ben hot. In this book, Ben admits to know about Pilar's long crush on him, but did he have feelings for her? You know, other than "I jUsT nEeD oNe NiGhT wItH hEr"???
– Also......... WHY THE HECK WAS THE WHOLE THING WITH KAYLA SO OVERLOOKED AT THE END??
Despite all the pointers above, as well as some farfetched elements of the story (like THE QUEEN casually being at the stadium), I enjoyed this book. I liked Pilar, and Ben turned out to be a nice guy too.Though despising the way the author excused cheating with grieving, I LOVED Ben and Tamara's dynamic. I appreciated how they, not only managed to stay friends, but also were so present in each other's daily lives, providing Asher with family unity, even though mom and dad were no longer together.
I also think this book made a better job at setting the tone for the next installment. There was the accident and the partying instead of resting that followed. Amaris' need to settle down and Joss' hard task to find someone suited for him. There was already banter between the two, and Pilar even called him out on his moodiness whenever Joss mentioned other men.
– I still had issues with the writing;
– The plot moved too fast
– The struggle to wrap my head around the concept of traveling in this world is still pretty much real
– I lowkey hated that the book started... you know... THE MORNING AFTER, considering Elias' book did NOTHING to introduce the new couple. I needed the author to set a scene on Pilar and Ben's dynamic. Were they friends? Kinda strangers who frequent the same events and kinda wanna bone? And about that night, did they plan to meetup, or did he find her drunk at an event and decide to take her home? GIVE ME A REASON FOR THEM TO END THE NIGHT TOGETHER!!!
– Is there too much to ask for more development in the feelings department? In book 1, Pilar admitted finding Ben hot. In this book, Ben admits to know about Pilar's long crush on him, but did he have feelings for her? You know, other than "I jUsT nEeD oNe NiGhT wItH hEr"???
– Also......... WHY THE HECK WAS THE WHOLE THING WITH KAYLA SO OVERLOOKED AT THE END??
Despite all the pointers above, as well as some farfetched elements of the story (like THE QUEEN casually being at the stadium), I enjoyed this book. I liked Pilar, and Ben turned out to be a nice guy too.
I also think this book made a better job at setting the tone for the next installment. There was the accident and the partying instead of resting that followed. Amaris' need to settle down and Joss' hard task to find someone suited for him. There was already banter between the two, and Pilar even called him out on his moodiness whenever Joss mentioned other men.
fsmeurinne's review
4.0
This novella is based in The Sinful King world, Pilar, Elias and Aramis sister. This is the story of a royal and a soccer player, Pilar and Ben. This book is sweet and just perfect little read, I loved The Sinful King so much so I enjoyed this novella immensely.
pioneer's review
2.0
When the breakup is actually warranted!
Anyway, the whole secret thing... yeah, the thing is...
Also with Ben... I get like growth and whatever. But man, I kinda hate cheaters. Like a lot. Don’t ask if I’ve been hurt before, we don’t need to go there. I just have this thing about them. And yeah yeah talk about how he was at a low point but... ugh, I can’t just not think about it.
Novellas don’t convey love that well. That’s mostly the thing I got outta this.
This is pretty fine though. Not too messy—well, it is, but not like messy-messy, y’know? No? Okay, well...
Anyway, the whole secret thing... yeah, the thing is...
Spoiler
if I go one date with you, you don’t have to tell me. Two dates, nah. Three dates, I mean there’s a reason why I keep coming back right? You gotta tell me before it gets to five is all I’m saying. I call it emotional entrapment if you don’t. Because if you don’t tell me, I’ll get too attached to you if I really like you, but then when a curveball like that is thrown my way? I’ll be pissed. Well because I hate children. BUT I STILL LIKE TO KNOW BEFORE I FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU FIRST JESUS FUCK. Yeah, I get having your secrets, but it’s kinda fucking important to tell the person you’re seeing that you come as a package deal with a kid.Also with Ben... I get like growth and whatever. But man, I kinda hate cheaters. Like a lot. Don’t ask if I’ve been hurt before, we don’t need to go there. I just have this thing about them. And yeah yeah talk about how he was at a low point but... ugh, I can’t just not think about it.
Novellas don’t convey love that well. That’s mostly the thing I got outta this.
This is pretty fine though. Not too messy—well, it is, but not like messy-messy, y’know? No? Okay, well...
lizs_book_nook's review
5.0
This book was absolutely perfect! While you can certainly read this book without reading The Sinful King, learning about Pilar and her brothers before enhanced the story.
But watching Pilar and Ben’s story unfold was absolutely wonderful! I feel head-over-heels with both of them. Together their chemistry was explosive! There was something so special about them together.
The way they were with one another was truly magical! To see them each welcoming the other into their worlds. To see them both living their lives to the fullest and being truly and genuinely happy together is beautiful.
From beginning to end I was completely captivated by this story! I smiles, cried, laughed and loved throughout this book. It was an absolute 5 stars!
But watching Pilar and Ben’s story unfold was absolutely wonderful! I feel head-over-heels with both of them. Together their chemistry was explosive! There was something so special about them together.
The way they were with one another was truly magical! To see them each welcoming the other into their worlds. To see them both living their lives to the fullest and being truly and genuinely happy together is beautiful.
From beginning to end I was completely captivated by this story! I smiles, cried, laughed and loved throughout this book. It was an absolute 5 stars!
2kidsandagoodbook's review
4.0
I loved Pilar and Ben. Ben being one of Elias and Aramis’s friends has been around and Pilar has been hard core crushing on him for a while. Which is how Ben finds the perfect reason to get some time with her, perfect time and place. I loved their chemistry together and seeing how everything played out since both have their own reservations from their pasts.
proud_book_nerd's review
5.0
Perfect on the Pitch with a great assist
I enjoyed getting to know the royal family during 'The Sinful King'. I knew I would enjoy getting to know Pilar. BUT I can say I was SHOCKINGLY surprised about how amazing Benjamin Drake was. His dirty mouth, caring nature and the ability to make the Princess swoon! There were actually twists and turns I didn't expect in such a short book(it was much longer than I though it would be!) I enjoyed this quick story and fell in love with more new characters and new villain I wish got lost out at sea! I can't wait for Aramis' book!
I enjoyed getting to know the royal family during 'The Sinful King'. I knew I would enjoy getting to know Pilar. BUT I can say I was SHOCKINGLY surprised about how amazing Benjamin Drake was. His dirty mouth, caring nature and the ability to make the Princess swoon! There were actually twists and turns I didn't expect in such a short book(it was much longer than I though it would be!) I enjoyed this quick story and fell in love with more new characters and new villain I wish got lost out at sea! I can't wait for Aramis' book!