3.67 AVERAGE

adventurous lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I was very surprised at how much I enjoyed this, but honestly I shouldn't be. It's indulgent. It's fun. It's a good gay time šŸ³ļøā€šŸŒˆ

I love the plot story.

Books with magic, betrayal, love and a little bit of mystery are often the best for me.

The sex scenes are not my favorite. Not at all.

4.5 stars for the mission, it was fun.
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brjoey99's review

5.0
adventurous emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
adventurous funny medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

2.5 There was potential but not fully flushed out.
adventurous funny lighthearted mysterious tense slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Where do I even start with this one… it had so much potential and failed so miserably. The sole reason this is even getting a star is due to the plot. It was quite a fun basis and the ending was spectacular. BUT everything else felt like a brick wall to finishing this. The writing was by far the most horrendous part of it. Not only were sentences short and choppy, but the characters were so flat and boring. If it weren’t for the chapter headings, I’d have no idea who the perspective was coming from. Also if I saw the word ā€œgodsā€ one more time, I probably would’ve ended up needing a new Kindle. On top of the dissatisfactory writing, the author could not seem to understand the balance of fantasy and contemporary writing. If we are put into a world with lush magical, living houses and walking or carriages for transportation, please enlighten me on how dirt bike races and sports bras play a key role here. Honestly, I would trust a 14-year-old on Wattpad more with this plot, their writing would probably be far better :/
fast-paced
adventurous funny medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
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debzydoodle's review against another edition

DID NOT FINISH: 57%

I was just bored. The sex was hot but it wasn’t for me
adventurous funny hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

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