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Piecing Me Together by Renée Watson

caffeineaddict980's review against another edition

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5.0

'I am learning to speak. 
To give myself a way out.  A way in.'

Jade is from a rough neighbourhood that she knows she needs to get out of if she ever wants to be successful.
She takes all opportunities,  however,  there seems to always be barriers.
Will Jade ever end up where she wants to be?

Wow.
This is an inspirational novel based around race,  defying expectations and acceptance.
A definite add to my bookshelf!
This is a majorly important novel,  touching on some key issues within the general society.
5 stars!

lattelibrarian's review against another edition

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5.0

Oh my god, I love this book.  I feel like this succinctly summed up everything I learned in my ethnic lit classes and everything I've learned from my own experiences and studies.  I think those who find themselves dissatisfied with this book are so because this book is very much about an internal journey in which Jade learns to speak up for herself, in which she learns to fully commit to even the opportunities that do not spark joy.  

When Jade is recruited for Women to Women, a program for "at risk" black girls, she feels more than uncomfortable.  Is she at risk because she's poor?  Because she's black?  Because she's at this school on a scholarship?  How dare they assume that, especially when she has a 4.0 and takes every single opportunity given to her.  But when she's paired up with a mentor who doesn't even show the first night they all get together, she's rightfully angry.

This book is set in Portland, Oregon, which is such an important setting for this book.  Portland, Oregon is such a neo-liberal city that preaches inclusion and acceptance, but really is one of the most racist cities out there.  Given that, the topic of this book fits in perfectly.  Jade is poor and black, and must learn how to navigate a world she's never been privvy to, whereas her mentor, Maxine, is black and comes from money, and must learn how to understand how and why her privilege and oppression mix to create an uncomfortable dynamic.  

Speaking one's truth, using one's voice, and taking a stand for what you believe in are all important themes from this book.  Where The Hate U Give uses the same themes in a very external, community-impacting way, Piecing Me Together uses these themes to make an impact on a personal level.  

Overall, this book is so incredibly amazing, and so worth the read.  I highly urge everybody to read it and experience the wonderfulness that this book offers!

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johnnymacaroni's review

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5.0

I really loved this. Even though Lee Lee is the poet of the story I found the writing so lyrical, almost like free verse at times. I really liked the characters in this book-they are multidimensional and grow throughout the story, they are also flawed but likable and I would absolutely read another book with Jade in it (even though I often admit I am not a "series person"). Such important issues get brought up and addressed but it isn't all wrapped up in a neat, simple package either - just like real life. It felt very authentic to me.

amyv's review

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3.0

3.5 stars. I would have enjoyed this book more if it were either a bit longer and more traditional or a bit shorter and more lyrical/poetic. As it is, I felt like it couldn't decide which it was trying to be. There were random, brief poetic sections that didn't seem to match with the plain language and narrative style of the rest. Aside from the main character, none of the characters or relationships seemed fully fleshed out to me, which made it hard to invest or connect.

fairallpug's review against another edition

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challenging emotional medium-paced

3.75

reba_reads_books's review

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5.0

It's been a really long time since I read a book that reminded me why I love the young adult genre so much. Goodreads friends, if this one's on your TBR, move it up. If you love YA and it's not yet in your TBR pile, add it. This book does it all - it proves phenomenal YA without romance is possible; it does everything a diverse read is supposed to do and more; it shows not only where the lines between races, classes, and ages are but also how to cross them and connect over them;
Spoilerit has a happy ending, without feeling forced or cliche,
it reminds me why we need stories about hope.

polychrome's review against another edition

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emotional hopeful informative inspiring reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

Well written. I wish I could keep reading to learn more about her life. 

indecisivesailorscout's review

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5.0

I received a copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not change how I feel bout this book.

Piecing Me Together is about Jade, a junior at an elite private school, navigating her way around the multifarious areas of Portland and learning to use her voice when people try to “save” her from the 'hood with opportunities that are more objectifying than rewarding. All Jade really wants from this school is a chance to study abroad in Argentina or Costa Rica, a place where she can continue to learn Spanish and get the opportunities she wants, instead of the ones people think she needs. This book shows us how this theme plays into all kinds of aspects of her life, from her relationship with her mother to her friendship with Sam, her experiences when out at fancy restaurants downtown with Maxine versus walking around North Portland with Lee Lee, how people treat her at school and at the mall and even in line at Dairy Queen. We see through her eyes how others look at her and see what they want to see, just a fat black woman living in the projects, but miss all the pieces that make up the whole of the big, beautiful soul who is the heart of this story.

As much as I enjoyed this book, it does have a couple of minor drawbacks, including a pacing style that took me a while to get used to. The book is told in a linear way that jumps across time sometimes chapter by chapter, so that 3 chapters ago it was Thanksgiving but now it's the day after New Years. This is not helped by the fact that there are several very short chapters, so those 3 chapters equaled about 10 pages total. However, I ended up appreciating this kind of storytelling in the end, because it gives Watson more room to show rather than tell the readers what's going on and the effect it has on Jade and everyone around her. I use the critique of "show, don't tell" in a lot of books similar to this one, but Watson executes this goal flawlessly throughout the story.

One scene that stood out to me is the chapter where Maxine first comes over to Jade's house, and Jade is worried that Maxine will comment on how poor they are instead of spending time getting to know Jade. Spoiler alert, Maxine's pretty chill - and they actually spend the whole time sitting together for hours, taking out Jade's braids. This scene made me realize that I've never seen that in a book before, any book, even though I know it's a regular thing. I still don't know how to describe it, but it feels like I learned something. Not how to take out braids - but like, an answer to a question I'd never asked, or even considered asking. I told my best friend (who is black, and has really gorgeous hair) about this, and she told me this wasn't surprising, given the overwhelming majority of YA literature is centered around white characters with white authors who only tell one kind of story. I have been blissfully unaware of how rare it is to see a story that represents her in a realistic, honest to the bone way. This was one of those moments that gave me pause, and I'm seeing how blind I've been in a way I hadn't even considered before.

There is another chapter around 75% of the way through the book that made my heart cry out, and my first thought was to write "I have no words," but I know that isn't true. For a few chapters, Jade has been thinking about Natasha Ramsey, a 15-year-old black girl who was brutalized by the police at a house party for nothing more than being loud and black. After her brother E.J. tells her about the incident, Natasha's beating underscores the next several chapters that talk about praying but staying silent, white people who don't think this - or any of the other microaggressions and injustices against Jade at the mall, at school, at her mentor's house - are about race, and this chapter, these two pages. Jade, Lee Lee, and Andrea are walking from the corner store when they see a black woman getting pulled over by white cops. Jade says, “We walk closer. Stop at enough distance not to be noticed but close enough to be witnesses. [...] There's no commotion, but still, I start taking photos. I don't know why. I just need to.” Jade hears a rattling sound, and realizes it's the bag from the corner store that Lee Lee is holding, and she's shaking so hard it's making the bag shake too. Jade takes the bag from her hand and squeezes her empty palm, and Andrea puts her arm around Lee Lee to steady her as both girls try to console her and themselves, “It's okay, Lee Lee. We're okay. It's okay. She's fine. We're fine. Everything's okay.” Jade takes the photos from the scene and cuts them up to make a collage, but starts to cry while she works because of all of this grief she's been holding in.

“Every tear I've been holding in goes onto the page.
Tears for Mom's swollen ankles after a long day of work, for her jar of pennies. For every “almost,” for every “Things will be different next time.” Tears for what happened with Mrs. Weber, the lady at the mall, the boys at Dairy Queen.
[...]
Tears for every name of unarmed black men and women I know of who've been assaulted or murdered by police are inked on the page. Their names are whole and vibrant against the backdrop of black sadness.
Their names. So many, they spill off the page.”


I cried while reading this. I don't know how Lee Lee feels because I've never experienced that fear for myself, but every time a new name surfaces of yet another unarmed black person killed by police, I hold my best friend a little tighter. I pray for her mom, and her dad, for her brother, for her little baby sister, and I am so glad it wasn't one of them and they are safe. I am so angry that I feel that way, but also so scared deep in my bones that this keeps happening and nothing changes.

The book ends with an open mic/art expo in honor of Natasha Ramsey, and it is a really powerful climax that ends the book. I know most of my review was centered around something really depressing, but it was also necessary. Piecing Me Together is a collage of a young black dreamer, a work of art that shies away from nothing and no one. It celebrates black excellence and commemorates black lives lost. It closes on a moment that is an encouragement to speak up and be loud, and we will listen. It asks you to sit up and listen. And you do listen, again and again and again.

shelmer75's review against another edition

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challenging emotional hopeful inspiring reflective medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

kristenremenar's review

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5.0

Excellent realistic fiction, no sex/drugs/rock'n'roll so can be given to youngers or to conservative teens. Great for discussions about what it means to be an at-risk kid and how the labels we put on people can never begin to tell the whole story.